Reviews for Defeated
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
That was wonderful. Sexy, passionate, romantic.
helaluvE chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Oh Lord *fans self* phew! That was intense and so well written!

Bravo my friend! Bravo!
Ipok87 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I really liked this!

Now I want my Edward, please?

No, seriouly, this story is so good.
OoverO chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
M, amazing. (:
Fantastical Fwooper chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
yumm. haha... but it was good. very good. i liked it :D
The Only Pancake chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
I loved that they were being playful. Everyone writed the B/E lemons so damn serious all the time They like to have fun!

I'll be taking that Edward now. _
krizue chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
pretty cool!
BeenDazzledByEdward chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Loved it haha! Totally thought Edward was going to win. Good twist :D

Do I get an Edward now? :P

Really good one shot, well done.

Samantha

x
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Haha, that was good. Oh, Edward. Bella will always beat you. Or...most of the time, lol.

Angelica
FutureAuthoress13 chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
LOL! Nice author's note at the end.
LilysMommy chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Wow.

That's hot. lol
CookieDee515 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Review review review! haha i can see that too, Edward loses. [grabs Edward and runs] great story!

Cookie
fleckpuppy chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
hahaha...wow. ]
bitemypillows chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
I can't believe anyone WOULDN'T review with that incentive! This is great! Like someone else said, sexy but without saying too much. Just right to get your readers all hot and bothered. I love the way the tension builds throughout. It also picks up the way that B&E are both stubborn and quite dominant in their way (I don't mean 'dom', rather assertive). I sincerely hope you write more PLEASE!
Phantom-writer3739 chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
m...yummy...

please write some more!
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