Reviews for Wind and Water
jp chapter 1 . 1/2
Brilliant! I love senru..
Star7 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Really well done! Metaphors are beautiful and realistic. I love the idea that the wind cannot be touched, it only touches other things. Just lovely :)

Things got a little bit cloggy at the end. "Let me be the water the wind [etc.]..." had maybe *slightly* too many repetitions for comfort.

Still, it was very nice :)
anatagasuki chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Heartfelt. I like this very much. I'm almost speechless.
rainbowsindecember chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
pretty. i like the metaphors, and how you managed to describe rukawa and sendoh to suit the elements you wanted to portray. angsty, but an interesting take on senru. short and bittersweet:)