Reviews for The Heart of a Tortured Soul
Aquamarine Shadows chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
This is really insightful! I like it, relating to Nazi Germany and all. It gives a good reason for the teardrop markings under his eyes. It was well written and nicely thought out. Nice work!
OnCeUpOnA-TiMeLoNg-AgO chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
I love this fic. and I think u made ulquiorra act alright (i mean he was still human, so I think he can have emotions.)

I wuld love another fan fic. of their lives b4 that! I spent hrs. searching for an Ulquiorra x oc (there aren't many) and I was just overjoyed when I found urs! btw love history related stuff (as u can see in my Ulqui fics) so that was just a bonus! kudos to u on a job well done!

sorry for the long review! ;
fanfictionusername chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
me like this..
MarshMerro chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Oh my... I loved this!

*claps hands while tears are pouring down my cheek*

Poor Ulquiorra, I wish I could make him feel better. T~T
InactiveAcct chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Wow, this is an awesome story. It would be awesome if Ulquiorra's past were like this in the original story!
Kuroharu chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Nice idea...

good writin...

but it seems a bit lacking... maybe its just me though...

but coincidence...

i was plannin on writin the same thing...

Eia San chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
The second my eye roamed over the description of this fic I was hooked and knew I had to read it.

Such an interesting story you have created! The transition from Human to Hollow (and then of course, in Ulquiorra's case, to Arrancar) fascinates me. The loss of emotion and their evolution is interesting!

I like to think that a lingering of their "human hearts" still hides somewhere within them, and your story fed that fascination of mine so well. It would be great to see more of it. Cheers!
saiyajinxyz chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I have to say, that I was not disappointed with this story. Lately, I have found that stories I would find interesting to read because of their summaries usually end up being not what I expected, mostly due to poor writing and execution of the plot. I didn't find that here, and the end of this story got me to ponder Ulquiorra's past and his slow transformation to his hollow form, then to either his vasto lorde form or adjuchas form, and eventually to his current rank as an espada for Aizen's artificially engineered arrancar army. I really think that you should write a story looking into his past life and how the loss of Christine changed him to what he is today, in more detail then what was given in this one-shot. I really did enjoy this story. Like I said, it got me to thinking. Thanks!
yume girl 91 chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Sweet!I hope you don't mind if I add this to my C2?
Wait-For-Sleep chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Wow, this is really interesting, I liked it a lot. I like hearing theorys on why Ulquiorra is the way he is, and this was different and I enjoyed reading it. Well done.

I think it would be cool for you to do a fic about Markus and Christine, but then again, maybe not many people would read it if they haven't read this.

Anyhow, well done and thanks for the read :D
Eredis chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
This story actually made me feel sad.

It has a lot of emotion.

You should write the fic about Christine and Markus.