Reviews for I Say Love You with Murder
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I enjoy your psychotic mind
lost-lil-pup chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
has he killed kenny because he want dawns plan finish?
Platinum-Daylight chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Did Kenny really have to go ;-;

Anyways, err...this was good...except for one thing. Descriptions. Be more specific about why Dawn had a change of heart to kill herself rather than Gary. You could have let Gary been more convincing. But the Cavaliershipping really got to me. Adorable.
kati406 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Why Gary killed Kenny? well ... nice story.
Capital WHY chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
That was . . . I'm sorry, the plot was just . . . I don't wanna be mean, but . . .

Okay, that wasn't good.

The plot was paper-thin, I knew exactly what was going to happen from the first sentence. The end didn't make sense at all. Her change of heart was unrealistic. The grammar was sometimes off. And it was just weird.

Sorry. ;_; I can't stand writing things like that . . . Also, since this fic is kinda old, I'm 100% positive you've gotten better, but still . . .



earlymorninglight12 chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Why did Gary shoot Kenny? So no one would know about Dawn? Good story; I enjoyed it. But poor Paul, he HAD to die.
KaterinaBeloved chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I kinda thought she was the killer when she had 3 boy friends but i wasn't sure / stop making me think! but why'd gary shoot kenny? poor guy...
Mumble 101 chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Why did Gary kill kenny
Cased In Darkness chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Firefly: I wish dawn was like that in the anime!

Yaoi: Firefly, only you would. anyway nice story