Reviews for The Hurt of Harry Potter
shdwgurl69 chapter 2 . 10/16
um I think the lack of spacing intimidates readers
shdwgurl69 chapter 1 . 10/16
perhaps you could refrain from using the bolded lettering? and the lack of paragraph spacing needs a bit of work...
afkdsfldskf chapter 2 . 5/8
Cannot read chapter error: 33 malfunction death
misswb xx chapter 3 . 2/28
please updade this is amzing
misswb xx chapter 1 . 2/28
can u plrse update xx this is amazing
10leckersley chapter 8 . 1/20
NO! PLEASE finish... I have so many unanswered questions; does Ron and Hermione find out
AnetteRuby chapter 2 . 1/12
Oh...My eyes!...Please do something about the format of this chapter...
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 10/15/2015
The formatting on this makes this hard to read and understand please fix it
10leckersley chapter 9 . 8/1/2015
PLEASE FINISH! it was really good...
darkpercy5 chapter 9 . 6/14/2015
Please continue. I like it. XP
ButterJane chapter 9 . 3/29/2015
We need more!
nightpurr chapter 9 . 10/9/2014
I do like your story parts do feel rush or maybe lacking some. I do tho enjoy it & looking forward to finding pour what happens neck.
sophiekelly4444 chapter 9 . 1/6/2014
I really enjoyed your work/ fanfiction, and I thought that it was really inspirational and very different (in a good way!) to other fanfiction, I don't mean too nag, BUT PLEASE UPDATE thank you x
ink and blue jays chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
Block of text...
anonymous chapter 2 . 10/15/2013
paragraphs help with readability. Please consider using them in the future.
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