Reviews for What Goes Around, Comes Around
Guest chapter 15 . 10/30/2015
This story is good - real good. But still really curious what is the other ending though...
Guest chapter 15 . 10/30/2015
Nice story ! enjoyed reading it! hope to read more from you about H/G !
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Yes, the grammar could use some improvement. There were a LOT of homophone errors especially.
That's what a good editor or beta is for. ;)
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 15 . 2/1/2015
Just Like that?
I know he has fucked up a lot...
But shouldn't he be scared when they make love the first time after the talk?
This is the first time in his life he became serious and 'Boom' there you go, she ran away...
Shouldn't he be afraid that she will do another runner?

Anyways, good story...
Held me captive for a long time...
Keep up the great work...
Guest chapter 15 . 12/27/2013
Really enjoyed it. )
SarahC20 chapter 15 . 12/26/2013
I just finished your story and I really like it! Good job!
ginny andrews chapter 4 . 11/1/2013
That was so awesome
My name is famous but anyway that was the third best fanfic
1)The promise ring
2)Time changers everything
3)What goes around,comes around
Love your fanfics
katie.waite.24 chapter 12 . 9/10/2013
Hey just 1 quick English thing,

Thought to think

Taught to teach

I understand English is not your first language but really love the story . :)
destiny is choice chapter 15 . 2/18/2013
moonstone88 chapter 15 . 1/20/2013
found this just today, I think I started reading it at one point but it got lost in the jumble and I'm very glad to have found it again! loved it and can't wait to see what else you cook up, great work!
mrs.coltondixon chapter 15 . 11/16/2012
So good! Loved it!
Riam chapter 7 . 10/12/2012
Just a litle critiscism: a Porsche Boxter 911 does not exist, they are two diffirent type of cars.
Riam chapter 15 . 10/5/2012
I loved your story, your caracters have spunk, they 're real and fun. Your storyline is a lot like JKR's original, unexpected with a nice sprinkeling of humor.
SableUnstable chapter 15 . 10/4/2012
This is a really great story. I liked it alot. Deep and intense in places and funny and fluffy in others. And the lovely lemony bits were an added bonus. If your other stories are as good as this one, I can't wait to read them! ;0)
A Dozen Lemmings chapter 13 . 9/9/2012
I really like this Fic but damn-it you need a beta
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