Reviews for Equation Seduction
Dying guy chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Please! Make a sequel to this one! Your writing is awesome!
rabbah chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Fyifbifcjjg / I love this so much.
Kinetic-Psychopathy chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Oh god... I EFFING HATE MATH!
But i loved the story! Or one shot... whatever! MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!
Crimson Hope chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Sho talk hurts my head. Great story by the way
Amiacifi chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
You made me fall in love with Sho/Neku! I hope you make more!
Anon chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Oh.. Oh my god. This was just, perfect. I can't even type right now. xDD I had a lot that I wanted to say, but I'm just at a total loss that was absolutely fantastic, you're amazing. Thank you so much, I'm only going to read this fifty million more times.
tofu-melon chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
YES! THIS IS WHAT I WAS HOPING FOR! I'm not the only one with some strange fetish for Pi-Face/Neku.

Oh, delicious. So much. You make my grammar go awry. In good way.
DeeDeeAnimeFreak chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Ho' Shi' I'd F* either off 'em but to bad they're gay!

Whatev'! This was HAWT! *gives you a giant hug*

You're so made of awesome I can't type enough 'awesomes' without my arms falling off!

Keep up the yoai, hectopascal! C'mon, radian, I command you!
SamaelSammy chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Wow... that was... hot. Second chapter? Please? :D
crazed fanchick chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
o...m...G! that was so HOT

! i had thought about this pairing, but i thought i was crazy! even my idiot apprentice says so! (yes, i have an apprentice, she even calls me master,as kinky as it may sound. well, she actually calls me stupid master, but oh well) i really liked the worded this, i can picture Neku getting in a fight with joshua and walking away! oh, and did i mentioned i loved this?
AngelicConquistador chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
... WOW. That was... so zetta awesome! I can read it over and over and I do not tire of it. That just equals infinite epicness! The detail was not too much or too light; and you have mastered Sho's character completely. *worships you* You've inspired me now; I wish to write a Sho/Neku too... I just need a good idea 8D but yes. This was wonderfully written, and I'll be sad if you don't make a sequel... it would definitely please this radian ;D
TedizStalker chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
...I'm dumbfounded...

But I know a good story when I see one.

Will there be another chapter? It looks fresh.
samayooo chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I'd F this. ;D

That was so zetta hot.

-tries to imagine the fic continuing-
breadstick chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Ohmigod! That's so cute, sque!

I mean, they even kind of referenced it in the game, didn't they?

Something like this:

Joshua: I think he's got a thing for you...

Neku: Wha?

Joshua: I mean, he keeps following you around...

Which is true...

Kind of also explains Neku's headache everytime Sho tries to speak to them again.

Neku: 'Oh god, no. Not this pervert again.'

Lol. Are you going to write a sequel? Because they were very much in character, although I would have liked a bit more of the sarcastic Neku. He seemed a little dazed in this fic, (haha, we all know why...).

And because Neku's name is neku...You know...Liking it like that, hee. Neku, you coy bastard.
ILuvstaread chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Excellent! I just finished the game and I really wanted to read this pairing! Thanx you should write another one shot.
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