Reviews for Equation Seduction |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SOH CAH TOA, really? |
![]() ![]() Please! Make a sequel to this one! Your writing is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fyifbifcjjg / I love this so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god... I EFFING HATE MATH! But i loved the story! Or one shot... whatever! MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sho talk hurts my head. Great story by the way |
![]() ![]() ![]() You made me fall in love with Sho/Neku! I hope you make more! |
![]() ![]() Oh.. Oh my god. This was just, perfect. I can't even type right now. xDD I had a lot that I wanted to say, but I'm just at a total loss~ that was absolutely fantastic, you're amazing. Thank you so much, I'm only going to read this fifty million more times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! THIS IS WHAT I WAS HOPING FOR! I'm not the only one with some strange fetish for Pi-Face/Neku. Oh, delicious. So much. You make my grammar go awry. In good way. |
![]() ![]() Ho' Shi' I'd F* either off 'em but to bad they're gay! Whatev'! This was HAWT! *gives you a giant hug* You're so made of awesome I can't type enough 'awesomes' without my arms falling off! Keep up the yoai, hectopascal! C'mon, radian, I command you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... that was... hot. Second chapter? Please? :D |
![]() ![]() o...m...G! that was so HOT ! i had thought about this pairing, but i thought i was crazy! even my idiot apprentice says so! (yes, i have an apprentice, she even calls me master,as kinky as it may sound. well, she actually calls me stupid master, but oh well) i really liked the worded this, i can picture Neku getting in a fight with joshua and walking away! oh, and did i mentioned i loved this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... WOW. That was... so zetta awesome! I can read it over and over and I do not tire of it. That just equals infinite epicness! The detail was not too much or too light; and you have mastered Sho's character completely. *worships you* You've inspired me now; I wish to write a Sho/Neku too... I just need a good idea 8D but yes. This was wonderfully written, and I'll be sad if you don't make a sequel... it would definitely please this radian ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I'm dumbfounded... But I know a good story when I see one. Will there be another chapter? It looks fresh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd F this. ;D That was so zetta hot. -tries to imagine the fic continuing- |
![]() ![]() Ohmigod! That's so cute, sque! I mean, they even kind of referenced it in the game, didn't they? Something like this: Joshua: I think he's got a thing for you... Neku: Wha? Joshua: I mean, he keeps following you around... Which is true... Kind of also explains Neku's headache everytime Sho tries to speak to them again. Neku: 'Oh god, no. Not this pervert again.' Lol. Are you going to write a sequel? Because they were very much in character, although I would have liked a bit more of the sarcastic Neku. He seemed a little dazed in this fic, (haha, we all know why...). And because Neku's name is neku...You know...Liking it like that, hee. Neku, you coy bastard. |