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This is "Fiction Life" YouTube channel, where I share fanfiction stories with an audience that loves listening to them. I recently came across your story and found it so captivating that I would love to share it with my subscribers.

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I genuinely believe your story deserves to reach an even wider audience. Our channel is supported by the community, allowing us to continue spreading great stories like yours to new fans. If you have any suggestions, such as a preferred "What If" title or any other changes you'd like, I'd be more than happy to accommodate them.

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the only problem with this story is that it takes very naive view on how trusting anyone in that village would be of a Naruto acting completely out of character and in possession of multiple A ranked jutsu. the village is a military dictatorship where paranoia keeps you alive.

other than that, good story

This is FANTASTIC. I wish it had at least still the rescue of Heiki! It’s been quite a few tears, though, so I don’t expect this to be continued. Well worth the read and I’m sure I’ll read it again multiple times. Thank you for sharing!

I know its probably pointless, but on the off chance you still read reviews, I think you're misusing the word "assisting." To assist means to help. But you often use it in situations where you imply observation only. The ANBU observe Naruto demonstrating his skills to Asuma, but they do not help him demonstrate. Team 10, however, ends this chapter planning to assist Team Gai. Additionally, you mentioned earlier the bell test occurring on day 2, however it would have happened on day 3 canonically (Kakashi tests his team the day after the team meeting and I'm not sure it would have changed). That being said, it's an enjoyable story and I liked the unique twists.

Continue

naruto showing devils cunning,silver tongue and demonic physical traits will aways ruba spot for me

chakra coils are almost a metaphysical thing,does that means naruto has his afult millenia old coils?

Damn what a great story, shame it was never finished

Update please

This is old as shit, so this review is redundant.

However, I usually use reviews on fics to judge whether or not a fic is a good read if I'm on the fence about it. This fic has an interesting concept with good characters, but the English is noticeably off. It reads like it was written by someone who speaks some amount of English, but is not experienced enough for immersion-breaking mistakes to occur. Unfortunately, these also occur fairly often. It would be worth your time if you can get around that type of frequent mistake.

~ciao

Update please

arrrhggg. I got so invested in this arc and it just ends before I get any resolution? this is one of the most frustrating cliff hangers I've read since the Mark of Athena.
like, what the shit man.

eh, it's a good story tho.

Sniiiffff c'était interréssant et tu as couper.
J'espère que tu pourras continuer la suite.
J'ai bien aimer.

Bonne continuation.

12 years... Damn

And then the brain dead retard abandoned the story. Fuck you.