Damn what a great story, shame it was never finished

Update please

This is old as shit, so this review is redundant.

However, I usually use reviews on fics to judge whether or not a fic is a good read if I'm on the fence about it. This fic has an interesting concept with good characters, but the English is noticeably off. It reads like it was written by someone who speaks some amount of English, but is not experienced enough for immersion-breaking mistakes to occur. Unfortunately, these also occur fairly often. It would be worth your time if you can get around that type of frequent mistake.

~ciao

Update please

arrrhggg. I got so invested in this arc and it just ends before I get any resolution? this is one of the most frustrating cliff hangers I've read since the Mark of Athena.
like, what the shit man.

eh, it's a good story tho.

Sniiiffff c'était interréssant et tu as couper.
J'espère que tu pourras continuer la suite.
J'ai bien aimer.

Bonne continuation.

12 years... Damn

And then the brain dead retard abandoned the story. Fuck you.

Considerando che sei italiano, che l'inglese non è la tua prima lingua e non hai una beta da modificare per te, questa storia è fantastica. Per favore continua a scrivere storie se puoi, e se non puoi io capisco e voglio solo che tu sappia che questa storia è la mia preferita finora per Naruto.

noooo u cant just abandon the story at the best part! plz at least give a summary of what was going to happen plz

This is the second time I've come across this story and read it. Even if the the next chapter wasn't complete posting what you had wold be nice as you left it on a cliff hanger.

I found your story at allthetropes groundhog peggy sue page. Surprised that I never heard of it until now.

The idea of repeating lifetimes is interesting, and I would like to read more, but I find your Naruto creepy and cringy, perving on a 12 year girls while being over 100 years old, the mention of being involved with various girls each life..

This is a funny storyIts humor actually amuses and it is well balanced.

Queria escrever isso mais cedo; a ino e shikamaru estão muito parecidos com Sakura e sasuke para o meu conforto. Você escreve muito bem as cenas de luta, arrisco dizer que é melhor que a maioria desse site, porém se não fosse a distorção dos personagens teria continuado lendo.
Há outro buraco bem incomodador... A perfeição e brincadeira de "deus" do Naruto estão começando a irritarem, a estória está aborrecida e chata por causa da sua extrema confiança. Mesmo que o objetivo da falta de acontecimentos seja melhorar os personagens para enfrentarem missões perigosas e os exames chunnis... A estória não me mantém entretida, parece muito desanimada.

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