Reviews for Promises
Clamorous chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
That was adorable! :D
you did a really great job!
and lol Davis flail.
firewhiz chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Sweet! Loved the 'truce' part and the fact that T.K. said 'I love you, Kari' while sleeping :)
secret354 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
aww that was adorable. haha i love the ending "WHAT ABOUT OUR TRUCE!" ha. cute
Kacee chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Awwesome story! Love it! Was this the end? Or will you continue? Does Kari get better? I have so many questions! I guess what I'm trying to say is I hope you write more! It's awesome. )

Kacee
Ardith Bale chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
awesome short sweet story. liked davis's characterisation, yolie in mother hen mode was amusing. great work.
SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I like the thought of Yolie going into 'nurse mode' n,n

And I like the way your write, particularly the characters thoughts- not incredibly easy to write, very easy to relate to!

A few little mistakes: "it was too late for he to get any response" shouldn't that be a her instead of he?

And "but it seemed like it was coming from far away, but it was from Yolei" one too many buts in that sentence for my liking...

Sorry if these seem picky!

Oh... and also, I'd love it if you continued this a little...

Not sure how, it's just cute and refreshing and I'd like to read another chapter like this one n,n!
rogue-scholar07 chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
aww. sweet story.
Lord Pata chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Another great piece of Takari, I laughed with the truce part between TK and Davis, though technically there wasn't much a truce anyways lol