Reviews for A Hero Lost
Aaron chapter 32 . 11/14/2008
Nice calm before the storm in the War Games match, AJ and Samoa Joe are working good together, not to mention the MEM are doing their dirty tricks. and Bret Hart is doing his job as enforcer. I laughed as Kurt was the one picked and he was being chased by Jake. You can't blame Jake. he's always been the Wild card of every group he's been in, and he wants Kurt bad! I love to see what happens next. Are you going to put BPP Scott Steiner in the match as well. Love to see what you do next
Aaron W chapter 30 . 11/5/2008
When the Outlaws strike by taking apart the MEM's cars and taken away the tires (funny btw) the MEM struck again by Sting hitting Jake in teh knee. So the Outlaws has an injured Jake. But Jake being Jake you'll have to knock him out for weeks to get him to get out of War Games. the fight between Jake and Kurt is going to be the one for the books. This is going to be some fight. Love to see what happens next
sub zero chapter 29 . 10/31/2008
good chapter what they did to main event mafias cars was awsome
Aaron W chapter 28 . 10/29/2008
I have to agree the name "Main Event Mafia" is a really cool name. I couldn't think of a name like that. What just happened puts the War Games on a whole new level. Main Event Mafia vs "The Original Outlaws (What do you think of my name for Jake's team?) We both know what happens when Jake takes it personal. Ask Jarrett, and Punk. and when Traci's gets involved it's not safe to be in the Impact Zone or the arena. Kurt say hi to your kids, because after WarGames you're going to have a long stay at the hospital. Great calm before the storm story. keep it up
Aaron W chapter 27 . 10/24/2008
Great chapter, So we find out who attacked Traci. Kurt, spend time with Karen and your kids, bucause you're going to be spending a long time in the hospital. Ask Jarrett, he spent 6 months in the hospital because he keep attacking Jake. and CM Punk went after Jake becuase not because of he's a recovering alcoholic but because of his relationship with Traci, and they had one no-sanctioned match that was probably still talked about. now Sting and the "Main Event Mafia" (what do you think of the name, that's what Sting and Co are calling themselves now since the last TNA taping and Mick Foley is now part of TNA) have to deal with the Omaha Outlaw. and once Jake wants to get even, come hell or high water he will. Ask Jarrett, Punk, Danielson, etc. One thing is that this is another TNA Gang War. and you know what happen between the Uprising and Jarrett's crew. Now Jarrett, AJ, are on Jake's side. it's going to be wild. keep it up

on another note, after bound for glory, there was an article on Traci in the local newspaper, a bit about her background. that she has an injury in her left arm since she was a child. When I read it, i thought, Jake knows about this. since they're married and all. so keep it up
Bluemoon chapter 26 . 10/21/2008
Hey! hope u were okay since u didn't update in a while! anyhoo this story just keeps getting better and better. well done!

Also why does no one else review this story apart from Aaron and me... it's a good story!
Aaron chapter 26 . 10/21/2008
WB Mark it's been a while since you continue with this story. Love to see what happens next. Question though, which one would you perfer joking Jake or revenge Jake? If you ask me, i would perfer the jokes, the jokes that he do are funny (I still laugh at the one liners he and AJ did at Christian's and Tomko's expense) and the Sting impersonation was funny. (Seems like what Charlie Haas is doing at a certain company up north) but whoever did Sting and his Superstars had a hand in it. One thing you should never do and ppl in the TNA don't follow is: Don't make things personal with Jake. This is the same Jake that put Jarrett in the hospital for 6 months, ended Joe's undefeated streak, was the one who survived that last 3 war games. not to mention took CM Punk apart in the cage of death. and they made it personal when they put Ms Knockout Law Traci Brooks in the hospital. Oh man the impact zone suddenly became a very dangerous place to be. be afraid be very afraid. this is good
Aaron chapter 24 . 9/25/2008
Now that was unexpected. Traci and Jake's second marriage. Hopefully it will be better than the first one. But the surprise was good. Of course AJ was the best man. Nice calm before the storm story. Love to see what happens next.
Aaron chapter 22 . 9/20/2008
Yep Traci and AJ are in big trouble (I bet you saw last weeks Impact show that show Traci being Knockout Law, she was great, she found her calling) and Jake now knows, whoo boy he's going to be to upset to see straight. and that's what the Superstars want. To attack Jarrett, you first attack his unofficial partner Jake. This is going to be some war. Love to see what Jake does

Did you see last week's show with the unexpected person. I was not expecting that? I wonder if you can use HIM (i'm not saying who it is for the ppl reading this who didn't see last week's show) in your story, can you imagine what a wild card he would be with Jake and Jeff. and can you imagine HIM taking Roxxi under his wing not to mention the battles he could have with Abyss? that would be wild!
Aaron chapter 21 . 9/18/2008
Nice match between Jake and Abyss. Things are really heating up, between Jake, Jarrett and the Superstars. Now Sting is attacking back but going after Traci and AJ. Jake is not going to be in the best of moods when he finds out. This is going to some war.

I bet you're watching TNA lately, things are heating up there too. Especially with Jarrett's return and the feuds that are going on. Like Samoa Joe vs Sting, and Jarrett's returning. this is good keep it up
Aaron chapter 20 . 9/10/2008
Things are heating up, in more ways than one. Traci and Jake are getting closer and the war between the Superstars and the Renegades (I think the name suits Jake and Jeff's group) Seems like Sting is beeing like Triple H was with Evolution and Hollywood Hogan was with the NWO, and Jeff Jarrett was with his group. Too power hungry. It's going to be interesting to see the match between Jake and Abyss. Lets face it Abyss is being used. Sting helped him out but he's using that to use Abyss to do his dirty work. Interesting to see Sting as a bad guy. This will be interesting to see what happens next
Aaron chapter 19 . 9/7/2008
At least one thing good came out of Jake's injury. He and AJ made up. No wonder why AJ was in such a mood and broke Jake's leg. and we find out how Jake got hurt and dragged into the Impact Zone. Now Jake is out for 5 months. He's going to do everything possible to cut that time shorter. He's got a score to settle. and of course a lot of TNA wrestlers know the deal. seeing who was waiting for the news of Jake's injuries. Wonder what AJ, Jeff, and Traci's going to do in the meantime when Jake's out on injury. Don't know but Jeff maybe a cancer, but there's a reason he was a cancer as Sting called him. I have a feeling that Sting and his Alliance is going to find out why. This is great so far
Aaron chapter 18 . 9/5/2008
Wow that was unexpected. How did Abyss and Sting get Jake out of the house, and dragged him to the Impact Zone? This is interesting. Love to see how Jake get back at the Superstars for this. As they say in wrestling. "You hurt me, you put me in the hospital, but you didn't get the job done" Jake will be back, and hoo boy he will be ticked. Last time he was ticked like this was when he put Jarrett in the hospital for 6 months. This will be one revenge streak. and great that AJ went and saved him, Hopefully that will bury the hatchet between AJ and Jake. this is great chapter.
bluemoon chapter 18 . 9/5/2008
Whoo go AJ! ive been waiting for this moment :)
Aaron chapter 17 . 9/4/2008
2 Chapters, both of them action packed. Great too chapters. the TNA wrestlers knows what Jake was doing all along but what he did to help Joe, is going to take some time for them to forgive Jake especially AJ. Especially with what happened to Jake's son and AJ breaking Jake's leg. and of course the dream he had that Nash was the final member of the alliance was quite a swerve Sting must've talked Abyss into putting Jake in the hospital because Sting helped out Abyss. and of course Jake still has some friends like Rhyno which i'm not surprised because Rhyno used to have the same demons that Jake has. and of course Jeff. and i liked that Traci and Jake are back together great part.

Even though the main plan has been stopped by Jake, the war still goes on. Wonder how the Alliance will get back at Jake for this. Like I said this will be some Gang War. Keep it up
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