Reviews for The Healer chapter 23 . 10/22/2021
The fact that Nessie got to keep Janes powers is cool ( though part of me thinks Alec would have been the better score if there's a threat of war).

Edward and Bella really are very understanding parents. Nessie is super lucky.

Hope there's a sequel, as the war this story mentions sounds cool. chapter 22 . 10/22/2021
Wow, Nessie really screwed everything up didn't she.

And how did Jacob get captured? I feel like I'm missing a lot. chapter 21 . 10/22/2021
I'm curious how Christian managed to get Annabell to Italy. Did he get her to cooperate or disclosure he somehow kidnap her by force? The later should be tricky with airport security.

In the least Annabell as far as we know can't die. They can still torture the heck out of her though. chapter 20 . 10/22/2021
I'm honestly surprised Nessie didn't try and spy on Annabell and Christian. If I were a half vamp with super hearing I would have. chapter 19 . 10/22/2021
Feel bad for Christian, but I wonder if he'll pull a heel turn here . That said I do think she spilled the beans with Christian way too soon.

Getting more Annabell stuff is good. There's definitely a lot going on with that character. chapter 18 . 10/22/2021
I was actually kinda hoping Seth would imprint on Annabell. I want Seth to get the girl. And obviously solves the immortality thing. chapter 17 . 10/22/2021
War with the Volturi and wolves sounds cool. This story is shaping up to be a lot more epic than I first though.

Glad Leah and Seth are returning with Jake. That hopefully means they play a bigger role moving foreward. chapter 16 . 10/22/2021
I am curious how Charlie will view Nessie and Jacobs relationship. On one hand he was obviously team Jacob back in the day with Bell. But on the other hand Bella wasn't 6 years old.

Poor Charlie. All this must really be confusing at times. chapter 15 . 10/22/2021
I wasn't expecting the Vilturi to show up in this ... the stakes definitely got higher.

Nice that we're heading back to Forks, so we can catch up with Charlie and the Pack. chapter 14 . 10/22/2021
The amount of action Nessie was giving to an unconscious Jacob was kinda messed up. Not that I think he minded much, but she probably needs to learn boundaries. I guess that's why 6 year olds normally don't have these sort of relationships. chapter 13 . 10/22/2021
Its pretty messed up that Annabell doesn't even have a clue what she is. No one to guide her.

At least a vampire can sort of guess what they are once they start craving blood. But Anbabell doesn't really line up with anything in mythology or pop culture. chapter 12 . 10/22/2021
Wow, a lot happened in this chapter.

Nessie getting with Jacob and having the talk with Bella and Edward was fun. Poor Jacob and Nessie have to wait 12 years to have sex... 12 years.

Annabell stuff is interesting. Glad we're starting to get some answers there. chapter 11 . 10/22/2021
Wow, Edward really is a cool dad.

And did he ask Nessie to dance with Spencer just to get Jacob jealous enough to make a move?

Still curious about Annabelle. Thats something to look foreward to. chapter 10 . 10/22/2021
I'm impressed how hands off Nessies parents are towards the idea at least of Nessie and Jacob being a thing given her age. I thought Edward at least might be somewhat over protective, but to his credit he's letting things happen as they go.

Part of me wishes we got different pov for the story. chapter 9 . 10/22/2021
Wiw, it almost seems like Nessie imprinted on Jacob rather than the other way around.

Definitely a tough position for Jacob though. Nessie us 6, so I get where he's coming from even though he's probably overthinking it.
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