Reviews for Perfection
Anon chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
Sounds like just the girl for Jake: someone who loves cars.
amep chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
I really enjoyed this. You write very well! I will have to check out your other stories :-)
rasheedah2907 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Loved this little gem! Thanks for sharing.
Unsocialite chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
This was cute, and the writing was pretty brilliant. I love how this was descriptive yet not overly so.

Ahem. Marvelous. :)
loverofthewolves chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
I absolutely love this story! I hate Bella and Nessie, e and eddie, but I love Jake ith OCs! this is really good, you should do more! :D
IRegretAllMyOldUsernames chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
It's so beautiful! u
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
loved it!
ForeverTeamEdward13 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Good story! Can you possibly continue this?
porcelian-doll chapter 1 . 7/18/2010

you see, i hate bella. and nessie. but i love the idea of this story. i love embry & quil. they're hilarious.

and mercy? love love love.

a girl who fixes cars and gets jake? i'm so freaking jealous, it's not even funny.
Tome-Reader chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Talk about perfect! Wow, really wow. Any chance of anything being added to this story?
chry.carrey chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I like the persepective this is written from. Using more "we's" vs. "I's".

I seem to know a girl who's in love with jacob, and fit's that exact physical description...she likes cars too, and she'd name her daughter Mercedes. :]
sataldajamahel chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
This is phenomenally well written. So beautiful. I love it! Well done!
Jacob's bitch chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
I like this story, I want Jake to end up with someone like her.
lacrema chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Loved it.
xXxWolfxLoverxXx chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
i love the one shot its awsome
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