Reviews for The Wolf In Me
Kaeberlily chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Hmm, a little unrealistic for their first time, but ultimatley not a bad fic. It also moved a bit fast. I'd suggest more build-up.
Jack chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Awesome, very hot
Culebra del Sol chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Personally, I like LynXEliwood, but there aren't enough lemons about her here for me to be choosy.

A nitpick of mine is that "place my seed inside you" line. Not romantic or erotic in the slightest for me.
starfish saver chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
nice footnote :)

rath's characterisation was spot on in the bit where they were talking.

not that it matters!

one of the better lemons the world's ever seen!

does playboy need any writing done? hahaha
XLightningX chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
oh that was lovly :)
ShadX - Shadow Elf chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
This is really, really... I have no words for it. It's really... Good! Yeah... ) Great lemon though!
jordan114725 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Nice story and... oh crap, you got any extra tissues?
Gaara's Lovely Lady chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
WHOO! Awesome story!
UzumakiMinato chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
good story want to help me write mine.
gurl.from.damnation chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I have no idea what tempted me to read this story (RathxLyn yuck! IMO) but I'm glad I did.
Zeratoth chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
he he he

most amusing.

excellent work.
Shade the Bat chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Was that last part really necessary?

Shade:...yes...
CHRIS CHAOS chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Heya! *bloody nose*
D chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Woot, finally an anonymous review! I must say that was totally and awesomely hawt. Descriptions were amazing and like what you said yourself, BEAUTIFUL. :3
skaterkidd93 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Wow this is definitely one of the more graphic fanfictions I have seen. Very descriptive sex but this story is well written. Keep up the good work!
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