Reviews for Edward's Eclipse
Guest chapter 6 . 11/18/2017
Bella totally RUINED that experience for Edward. Its really sad that Bella is such a selfish cunt. She knew damn well that was important to Edward but she ruined it anyway. I want to smack the shit out of her.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/17/2017
"was his challenge was not just for sport. . . " That's what you wrote. I don't know what your trying to say lol but you should seriously go over this story again. There are a lot of mistakes!

You will find that lovely gem in chapter 8 Temper. Along with some others.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2017
You put commas in weird spots. Like, this and, like that. But, also like, this too.

And there's some spelling shit to. Say no when it should say not. Stuff like that. I'd go over it again.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
that whole one down thousand to go shit is really getting on my nerves
cela chapter 2 . 1/19/2015
I don't know what the hell bella was thinking all through "eclipse". she went all the way to Italy to save Edward from killing himself, told him she would always love him with all that she was and then ran off to jake's house? not very mature bella!
Shadowhunter-Herondale chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
This is such a great start.
Pats2nd chapter 10 . 1/8/2014
Good job! Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Michelle Vasquez chapter 10 . 12/10/2013
I love it I love it I love it thank you. You did Edward justice.
kurtisha charler chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
are you ging to continue writing this book i want to continue reading if you are my email iz

email me if you are
KURTISHA chapter 4 . 7/13/2013
I KNOW RIGHT I LOVE EMMETT great chapter i realy enjoyed it thanks soooo much for writing 3
La Boricua Cullen chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
I did like this; immensely! I think that you really captured Edward perfectly.
La Boricua Cullen chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I enjoyed this chapter immensely and think that you really got Edward down perfectly. I look forward to where you go from here.
k1942 chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
Edward might not have such semi-friendly feelings for Jacob, if he had any inkling what the pup has up his sleeve for in the morning! Turnabout being fair play, neither does Jake have any idea of the bomb he's going to hear , so maybe they're even!
k1942 chapter 9 . 12/9/2012
The foundation of a future friendship is building in this cold little tent tonight! Who would ever have believed it?
k1942 chapter 8 . 12/9/2012
You're right about this being the best chapter in this book. It nearly tore Edward in two to watch Jake help Bella in a way he couldn't. I have always enjoyed the dialogue that takes place between them as Bella drifts in and out.
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