Reviews for Edward's Eclipse
Miss Alice Cullen x chapter 3 . 7/19/2009
This is really good, I don't really like Edward but it's nice to see into his head for once instead of Bella's. You writing is amazing, it's really fluent and you portray emmotions well. This chapter made me really hate Bella for being selfish and stupid. Great story :)
antipyro chapter 6 . 7/17/2009

Edward should be on the debate team. Talk about powers of persuasion - well, he can persuade me anytime for that matter. Naw, I'll even volunteer to go, problem.

Again, that back and forth manipulation of each other's thoughts and emotions - just darling! If Edward is strong enough to hold back on some of those smiles, surely, he has the strength to not kill Bella in bed. I know Bella already sees this in him. When will he realize it's his strength?

You've done it again, pulled at my heart strings and loosened my joy! *I could cry*...*sob*..
antipyro chapter 5 . 7/17/2009
No!...Yes!...No!...Yes! NO! ..YES!...NO!...YES!...

I just love this back and forth, bantering kinda', who will win this round? How will one get under the others' skin? OH! just hurry up to the trying out time.

As always, I just love your long, detailed and revealing chapters into Edward's head...*sigh*...

Hm...Black and White? I'll look that one up too!
antipyro chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
You have no idea how my self-control is being undermined!...but, I'm patiently awaiting the next, small insinuation of lust between these two. It's just too cute!

Ya, Ya, canon this, canon that...that's why this is better than canon!
antipyro chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
I agree with you, Edward should have hunted while Alice was keeping an eye on Bella and Angela...but, Edward does things the hard way, kinda' like a martyr. I'm so glad he kept himself under control - that's his strength! not only his love for Bella.

Love this to death...I can't imagine you not winning the Bellie Award for 'Canon Fic that's better than Canon'.
antipyro chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Interesting! I find myself trying to review what the book mentioned in these instances and find that, maybe I missed this...I'll have to re-read it. ...but what I do like is EPOV - it's the most precious of words and thoughts from the story.

Love this to death.
Fitten chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
surely the best Tent scene I've read from EPOV all those naughty Jacob thoughts revealed! its excellent,congrats!
MoriaAngel chapter 10 . 7/11/2009
I love this chapter too, so thank you!
MoriaAngel chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
Wow, that dark...

I did not know that Edward could or even would be like this...

But by all means, very well written!
MoriaAngel chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Hey, I found you trough the Eddies and Bellies page.

Congrats on the nomination, I can see why you're in.

You write really good!
tanwellman chapter 10 . 7/3/2009
Hey, congrats on your Bellie nomination. I saw this link on their site, and I am glad! This is a wonderful story-very in canon. "Fire and Ice" is one of my favorite chapters, as well.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

tanya :o)
mybigteddybearemmett chapter 6 . 6/30/2009
Great job!
mybigteddybearemmett chapter 5 . 6/30/2009
Great job!
mybigteddybearemmett chapter 4 . 6/30/2009
Great job!
mybigteddybearemmett chapter 3 . 6/30/2009
Great job yet again!
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