|Reviews for Edward's Eclipse|
| Serena530 chapter 8 . 1/1/2009
I loved all the chapters( I did read the ones that came after this..ie. compromise). Your such a brilliant writer. I wish I could write like you. I think you got Edwards point of view perfect. From his thoughts to his behavior and all. I can't wait to see what you write next. Will you tackle the fight between him and Victoria? Oh oh! And after Jacob kisses Bella and she realizes that she loves him too. Will you write his POV of that? I would love to know what he's thinking during that. I eagerly await the next chapter. )
| eye ree chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
i just found the story... wow, just... wow!
| J chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
This is very good. You should be a writer! Please write more!
| hpdude-4life chapter 8 . 12/22/2008
im rooting 4 edward!
wot this chapter was AMAZING u put evrything into it.
EVERY LITTLE DETAIL.
ur best yet.
| hpdude-4life chapter 7 . 12/22/2008
ok i get ur point.
i do luv 2 knw wot edward is thinking.
but this is better;
i knw the thinking, BEHIND the thinking.
| kryptoinuyasha chapter 10 . 12/22/2008
All I can say is...SPECTACULAR! I love this as much as Midnight Sun. You and Mrs. Meyer are definitely on the same wave length as far as Edward is concerned. It's very passionate, provocative, angsty, old worldly, insightful, and heart warming. Getting inside Edward's head, reasoning, and his viewed cursed existence is not an easy feet, but you convey it with such silken skilled ease, it gives me chills. You must continue with this. I would really love to see your complete interpretation of Eclipse (all the chapters mind you). It's a tall order, I know, but from what I've read so far of everything you've written, you have the insight and talent to bring his complete musings to the table for all of us to enjoy. *grinning* I will be anxiously (albeit impatiently) awaiting your next update...
| hpdude-4life chapter 6 . 12/22/2008
oh edward, u KNW his words r tru!
of course bella luvs u!
jeez must i spelt it out 4 u?
ahh this is the bit i h8.
edward feels just so HELPLESS n theres nuthin he can do but watch bella cuddle up 2 jacob black.
of all the blasphemies!
hw can this be ur fave chapter?
either way, ur obviously doin it justice.
| hpdude-4life chapter 5 . 12/21/2008
i remember h8in this part.
edward feeling so helpless cos his cold wud cause discomfort 4 bella, n he cnt do nethin about it...
its so sad.
den jacob cums along n warms her up.
i really dnt like him.
| hpdude-4life chapter 9 . 12/20/2008
omg dat was adorable!
theyre happy! im happy! rnt we all happy?
ok i think ive over done it.
| hpdude-4life chapter 10 . 12/20/2008
i luv da way we hear EVERY SINGLE DETAIL of wot edward is thinking?
cud this get ne better?
n YEY u got da chapter up!
nw, 2 of my many fave parts in eclipse...
compromise part 2.
| elislyn chapter 8 . 12/20/2008
This is really good, and I thought you should know. I've always considered Eclipse from Bella's prospective knowing that she was hurting herself trying not to hurt anyone, and knowing that Jacob was being hurt too, but Edward always seemed to mostly have it together, even though intellectually you know he must be hurt too. This I think really reveals the depth of pain that he must have been enduring. So, applause.
| babbles chapter 10 . 12/20/2008
So good! I don't know how you do this, It feels like Edward! I know that sounds so corny, And "No" I am not a 13 year old fan girl but Edward gives off this certain feeling and I have never read anything outside of the actual Twilight that had that, But this does. So very good, I hope this is still a work in progress...
| hpdude-4life chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
this is my fave chapter so far.
| latuacantante4him chapter 3 . 12/19/2008
| latuacantante4him chapter 2 . 12/19/2008
Poor Edward. Always torturing himself. Bella has no idea of his inner struggles. Great chapter.