|Reviews for Edward's Eclipse|
| Mayberry chapter 6 . 9/2/2008
this story is so good! Please keep updating! I absolutely love it :)
| WD-Den-Mum chapter 5 . 8/30/2008
| nicole317 chapter 5 . 8/29/2008
i really Luv your story! can't wait for more, update asap! _
| vampyrgroupie chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
I am really enjoying your take on Edward's thoughts in Eclipse. I absolutely agree with you as to his almost painful ability to see both sides of any situation as well as the self-loathing for his vampiric nature that constantly torments him. Keep up the good work-I am looking forward to Part 3.
| Stephanie C chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
This is one of my favorite scenes in the whole saga.
You are doing such a great job writing it from Edward's POV. It really feels like we are getting the missing Edward and Jacob thoughts that fit into the conversation we heard from Bella's ears.
| Peregrinate chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
Good update. I like your Epov. You have a good Jake too, which is important with the whole mind reading thing. I think Jake would enjoy torturing Edward with his daydreams a bit more than that, however.
| marjojo02 chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
Wow, great job again! Of course, you're working with such great material.
I slightly disagree with you on your portrayal of Jake though. I think his love for Bella was a bit more pure than you've shown it here, and that Edward would have seen that in his thoughts and respected it. Absolutely no objectification of Bella going on there.
| icefang7 chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
good chap, thanks..please continue
| mischief-maker1 chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
Awesome! Just as I imagined it! Can't wait for part 3!
| sophie chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
This story is awesome! I love hearing the thoughts of Edward, it makes it even more exciting. I hope you keep updating because this is definately one of my favourite stories.
Keep up the terrific work :)
| Peregrinate chapter 3 . 8/25/2008
Good EPoV. I'm braving a dial-up internet here, without my computer, so be happy that I'm even bothering to leave a review.
Good EPoV, again.
| NubianGoddess chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
Geez Edward...Horny much.
Very nice story so far. Everything always sounds better in Edward's POV. Don't you think so?
| Phantom-writer3739 chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
i think you really managed to capture edward's charecter.
| JenRar chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
LOVE this story from EPOV! Keep going! :D
| mischief-maker1 chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
I really love this story. I can't wait for part two! It's going to be almost painful for Edward, I think. You write so well...you should think about doing these few chapters from Jacobs POV too, though, Edward knows what he's thinking, so I guess that would be pointless, wouldn't it?