|Reviews for Ignited|
| KyokoHatake-Uchiha chapter 2 . 3/7
I like it so far. But what bothers me is that you have a certain amount of Quileutes going to that school in LaPush. Now that makes No sense. How can they're be a certain amount of them going to that school, on their own Reservation. Because there's only one high school in LaPush...
| Matsuo Nozomi chapter 3 . 12/18/2013
Hopefully she doesnt fall for him easily !
| Tamerlein chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Surprisingly enough, I enjoyed this story. And thank God that all the grammar is correct or I may have killed someone. Looking forward to reading the sequel.
| StormyRebel chapter 27 . 11/3/2013
AMAZING story! I have been getting more and more into packmember/OC stories, and I'm so glad that I found your story. It didn't drag things along, and while it wasn't every chapter something 'thrilling' happened, it was never boring.
Looking very much forward to reading the sequel!
| wolfhappiness chapter 27 . 10/26/2013
I liked this and I liked Sarah. You writing is good, sentence structure and all that. A few times, mainly earlier in the story, I was confused a little bit. I think it was when Sarah got sick. One thing you could do is to expand on description of what's going on, how people are feeling, etc. just to bring more depth and emotion.
And something I didn't buy was how blase Sarah was about Jake's relationship with Bella. Not that Jake and Bella can't be friends, but Jake constantly referred to Bella as his best friend. If I were Sarah, that would piss me off. Also, Jake and the wolves would always compare Sarah to Bella. That would piss me off too. And Sarah, never really questioned Jake about his feelings for Bella before the imprint. She just accepted the imprint pretty easily, never wondering if Jake still kept residual feelings for Bella (like Sam did for Leah). I see you're planning a sequel, so maybe there could be more tension between Sarah and Bella, causing Jake to have to make uncomfortable choices.
That said, I am looking forward to the sequel. Put it up soon!
| nathaliie chapter 27 . 10/22/2013
love this story!
| Guest chapter 26 . 9/19/2013
OH JESUS why would you end it like that I'm probably going to die thank you very much
| jesskalynn4 chapter 26 . 9/17/2013
cant wait for sequel
| Tomomi chapter 26 . 7/3/2013
Hay I like the stroy a lot, this is the first story that I've read that has my real name in lol _ I really enjoyed it _
| Guest chapter 26 . 5/16/2013
Really excited for the sequel! Please update soon!
| Aurora101 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Is there going to be a second one? I hope so! fingers crossed!
| SarahBear0627 chapter 9 . 3/12/2013
You're sentence structure is good, but I don't understand half of what's going on at all. So Sarah fainted at school and Jacob "protected" her, yet people are still making fun of her? I don't know any kind of school that would make fun of someone fainting. And then her and Jacob get into an altercation? I don't understand where Jacob got mad. And then she's calling herself a bitch and this and that, a bit of self pity I'm guessing. You need to make things clearer.
| YellowLeatherLover chapter 26 . 3/9/2013
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY!
I LOVED THIS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH! I REALLY DID.
IT WAS AMAZING. THANK YOU
I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING!
| ArtemisLuna85 chapter 26 . 3/5/2013
Great story...hope to read the sequel real soon.
| Saniyah Khan chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
loving ur story so far