Reviews for Lost Boy
SafaiaFureia chapter 9 . 4/26
I'm going to guess that some of what Harry remembers, the story and baby , is from when HE was a baby and his parents read to him and he was coo'd over. I'm enjoying this one, and like the others, hope that you will one day finish it. It is a bit fast paced but thats about the only critique I have at this time.
FandomFluke chapter 9 . 11/9/2019
I wanna know where Harry learnt the word baby! This story is adorable and I love it, it’s a shame you’ve abandoned it
FandomFluke chapter 6 . 11/9/2019
This story is so good! You are really talented and are portraying the characters as actual people with real thoughts and feelings and I find that so impressive! I hope this fic continues!
rowenasheir chapter 9 . 8/11/2019
Pity it stopped
rowenasheir chapter 5 . 8/11/2019
Seriously, many stories are inspired by others. Just give credit where credit is due or like another writer, in the disclaimer, say you are not sure where the inspiration has come from as it has many sources and say that you will give credit if it is brought to your attention. AND CARRYING ON WRITING!
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 3 . 3/23/2019
Dumbledore needs to be stripped of everything. Which includes all three jobs. And stripped of all of his assets and sent to prison for what is left of his natural life including stripping him of his magic. Plus the Dursleys also need to be sent to prison along with losing Dudley. Plus Marge should be sent to prison. But that's not all I would also apply corporal punishment a full spanking across their backsides to reinforce that what they did was wrong and criminal and I would beat them in the nude to make them get the full impact of skin on skin or a spanking paddle on the skin. I know a lot of people are against corporal punishment but I have met too many where that was the only way to get across what they did wrong. because of everything else just didn't work or at least not very long because they would go back and repeat the wrongdoing all over again.
Chezakeeba chapter 9 . 6/20/2017
I would love to read more! Great story so far!
Fanfictionranger chapter 9 . 6/19/2016
Awww Harry and a baby too cute! :)
Fanfictionranger chapter 7 . 6/19/2016
Ha who would of thought there be a baseball loving rapper house elf? XD too funny
and Harry tooo cute!
Justsomebodyelse chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
Please update. This is a great story and I wish it would be continued.
thunder angel13 chapter 9 . 1/19/2016
Great story love how harry reacts to everyone and how he dosent know better
Dreamcatcher360 chapter 9 . 12/19/2015
Please update I really want to find out what happens next! Xxxxxxxxxxxx
marthapreston4 chapter 9 . 7/25/2015
I really wish this was updated!
marthapreston4 chapter 8 . 7/25/2015
the house elf is hilarous
marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 7/24/2015
awww so cute
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