Reviews for adage
mj-hedwig13 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Ah so good! Gave me the goosebumps!
Art of the Artichoke chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
That was so brave of Mai. She really does care a lot about Zuko.
Crimson Cutie chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Short, sweet, and well written. Mai is a fascinating character and I really like the way you portray her and her feelings for Zuko.
Zephyras chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
I really liked this one, especially the last line. It was really powerful and I thought it was a good portrayal of Mai's feelings right before Ty Lee steps in. Keep writing!
The One And Only Lobster chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Nicely done. :) Even the writing is reminiscent of Mai; not a single superfluous word.
razzledazzle41191 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Short, but man this packed a punch! Your parallelism between the two times Zuko left was phenominal. The Fire Nation adage was brilliant, and just shows how far Mai has come. Major kudos!
Bluegoat chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Nice! I liked this reflective little one-shot.