|Reviews for Fame and Fate|
| TexasTwilighter chapter 8 . 8/17/2008
Just a quick, little note. In the story, characters keep calling Bella, "Mrs. Swan", which indicates that she is married. It should be "Ms. Swan" or "Miss Swan".
| Jaguarsolaris chapter 7 . 8/17/2008
ooh spooky! just when the date was getting interesting. is it mike? the bellboy?
| Raven Alice chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
no but he could almost choke, Less messy more adorable, followed by a blush, you spit out liquids, not foods, besides, it would be very cute too have pasta and drool running down your face.
Love the story cant wait for more, amazing idea.
| MEADTWIGS chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
OMFG. WHAT THE HELL! CONTINUE PLEASE PLEASE ITS GREAT!
| gaby45 chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
Yes you should make Edward spit put some food. That would be funny. Another great chapter.
| PuddingInGreatPain chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
hmm maybe i dnt know (Bout spitting out food) doesnt seem like him maybe he could swallow hard good chap
| edwardmasen chapter 5 . 8/17/2008
Great storyline - very different - I like it!
| kuntrygal chapter 5 . 8/17/2008
I like it! Cant wait to read more!
| gaby45 chapter 5 . 8/17/2008
I love this story. And now I understand why there 6 years apart. Are emmett, rosalie, alice, and jasper together?
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| Jaguarsolaris chapter 5 . 8/17/2008
sorry just now saw your fic. love it. different story line/plotline. love it.
| PuddingInGreatPain chapter 5 . 8/17/2008
omc this is brill haha bella got tricked into playing in her film lmao
| morikomizuki chapter 5 . 8/17/2008
I think this is great so far, I love it and can't wait for more!
| Sinful Seduction chapter 4 . 8/17/2008
O! I like this story a lot! And I absolutely LOVE how you updated four times today.
| TexasTwilighter chapter 4 . 8/16/2008
I love how Bella is the one in the power position instead of Edward. And they both seem genuinely nice.
P.S. Hot kiss scene!
| gaby45 chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I like it. Though I don't like the fact that Bella's older than Edward. I know it's only by 5 years, but still. It sounds like it's going to be great. UPDATE SOON.