Reviews for When Potter Changed To Harry
To lazy to log in chapter 2 . 7/21
It is good but I feel like it is too straight... You know. Let your words sit and build. To me it makes it more emotional and depth on the story
Not much spelling mess ups.( I can't find any)
I am not saying this to be mean or rude. To me you are very gifted and amazing. Just think about it. I am going to finish reading it though
JetRavenOnyx chapter 28 . 5/27/2016
Sirius is a moron. That is final!
~KidLover1412
JetRavenOnyx chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
Wow, just imagining that screaming match made my ears hurt!
~KidLover1412
Daw309 chapter 8 . 12/15/2015
HIS NAME IS HARRY AND WILLIAM
marthapreston4 chapter 4 . 10/7/2014
Okay so the fact that his victim feels defeated makes him happy is soooooooo disturbing . I am not so sure how much more of this i can read
marthapreston4 chapter 3 . 10/7/2014
Okay the abrupt way that this came about is just akward if the ministry was going to tell him wouldnt they tell him after the kids were born. And I really dont want to read a "forgive a rapist" story there is no way that it can be forgiven . and making people think its like getting hit and can fixed with im sorry is down grading to actual victims and the horror they go through
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
okay why didnt he go in and stop Vernon from going into the house and killing the bird and why isnt harry more upset
Hope06 chapter 42 . 8/8/2014
Awesome job with this
Alie-yaoi chapter 42 . 7/22/2014
I like
Ethyrin Kairos chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
The emotions could be more vivid, but otherwise, nice writing. I especially love the title lol.
Guest chapter 15 . 9/1/2013
like some parts of this, but don't like that severus keeps slapping draco. teachers aren't allowed to hit kids (unless they're umbitch but i refuse to put severus on a level with umbitch)
To the TARDIS chapter 8 . 5/21/2013
okay?
To the TARDIS chapter 7 . 5/21/2013
Awesomeness
To the TARDIS chapter 6 . 5/21/2013
WHOOOOOOOO GO SNAPE
To the TARDIS chapter 5 . 5/21/2013
(': Yay
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