Reviews for Moving on
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Who tf is 'Mark'?
anonymous chapter 7 . 4/23/2011
Nice. :)
DrawnToTheNight chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
awwwwwwww

the ending so cute

thanks for writing

drawntothenight
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
this was such a new story. this was the 1st of its type. i really like it...

perfect ending.. if this is the end. im satisfied
Kaitylyna chapter 7 . 10/26/2010
I loved the story and I could soo kill Alice for being mean when it wasn't Bella's fault!
Live-Laugh-Love-Till-The-End chapter 7 . 7/16/2010
creepy but very good :D
cb chapter 7 . 1/15/2010
cute...
Kendall94 chapter 7 . 10/18/2009
thats a good ending to a story...i really liked this story!
Ashlie Christine chapter 7 . 8/7/2009
Luved it!
Vampiregirl4eva2110 chapter 7 . 6/12/2009
I really like this story.I think that it was very cute but you should have started with when his wife left would have been reall funny if you would have put a chapter with Edward fighting also should put a chapter when Mark talks to how can Charlie be so clueless with what is going on with his daughter.
yours4alleternity chapter 7 . 5/15/2009
it was rly good i rly rly liked it
Noble Korhedron chapter 7 . 3/17/2009
Ah! A! I love how he can forgive her like that once he understands she's not trying to hurt him... I wonder what Mark will tell Charlie though?
1LovesLatin3 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
i wonder what alice is gonna do...
masha.a chapter 5 . 1/23/2009
OH MY FREAKING GOD! EW THIS OLD MAN IS IN LOVE WITH HER! EW!

good story btw ;) i ahte bella and its nice to see her in trouble mwahahahaa!
DobbyWobby chapter 7 . 1/3/2009
This is really good, i really like it!
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