| Reviews for Riddick |
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  Kai chapter 4 . 3/31 This mercenary guy is quite stupid, isn't he? If there's a " just smoke and mirror" association/society, do they really need a government and a police force? Do tennis clubs or model railway clubs or philatelist associations have government and police? Of course it's more. Sheesh! |
 The Ghostly Minion chapter 9 . 3/28 Nice, basically anti-climactic ending for Tommy and the rest of the DeathEaters. Ginny get what she deserves. Now for the rest. Dumbles and Ron. There might be a few other loose ends also. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 6 . 3/28 Ginny and Draco, comp,emely deserve the other in this story, for ll the wrong reasons! The background on elves is interesting. Glad Gred and Forge are now on board, but Likely they shouldn’t outstay their welcome — at least any more than they have! TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 5 . 3/28 OK, that ending was strange. I’ve got to guess it’s Tonks! TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 4 . 3/28 Voldy: Frightened to bits. Hermione: Ecstatic, then sad. Won’t be long ‘til you and Harry will be together. Toombs: Four down, should take the better part, but won’t. So soon will end up in one of his namesakes. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 3/28 Several good, good, people here. I particularly love Neville and Luna Longbottom! And then, four ‘Dead Men Walking’. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 2 . 3/28 No points for Harry being a BAMF. It’s something you’d expect. Hermione should get a clue quite soon. MRon, then the other ‘Weasels’ should get their thirty pieces soon. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 3/28 OK, this is a great start! Harry gets it, straight up the arse. Only one in his corner is Hermione, as always. In the end that should be all he needs. TGM |
| Mike Mattingly chapter 10 . 10/12/2024 This was freaking GREAT! |
| demonboy121986 chapter 6 . 5/9/2024 "Oh shit, gotta go." one of the best lines from Dobby. |
| Tigris DivingHawk chapter 10 . 4/6/2024 Great story I loved it keep up the good work I can't wait to see what else you have |
| Fenrir070 chapter 10 . 1/19/2024 Nicely Done! You did a great job of letting Riddick show his stuff while keeping a "core" of Harry intact. |
| Latarra chapter 10 . 9/26/2023 I enjoyed it. |
| Nulled Void chapter 10 . 9/1/2023 good |
| Gilliweed chapter 6 . 8/29/2023 The expression you tried to use in this chapter is to kowtow, which is a chinese term that refers to showing submission to a person viewed as a superior by way to kneeling and touching one's forehead to the ground. It has absolutely nothing to do with towing cows anywhere I'm afraid. :-) |