|Reviews for A Fox in a Cage|
| Ruaitae chapter 8 . 4/15/2013
I suppose you're not updating this anymore. It's a pity because I kinda liked this.
| TheHybrid02 chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
for the love of god write another chapter! This one of the best fem Naruto stories I've read! and the way you've portrayed Temari is so ... believable? realistic? i don't know how to describe it, but like mcdonald's,
"I'm loving it".
| Shdig chapter 8 . 1/7/2013
why did you stop this? it saddens me.
| Vagyr chapter 8 . 1/7/2013
Not easy to find good fics along these line. Hope you'll pick this up again eventually
| thewonderingman chapter 8 . 8/26/2012
All I can say is amazing.
| HopeSeiketsu chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
| HopeSeiketsu chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
Lol temari the sadist
| HopeSeiketsu chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
Nice seems realy interesting lol
| Jokulmorder chapter 3 . 3/4/2012
In one word, readable.
Hook, high grade.
Plot, none yet.
Spelling, you found the spell check.
Grammar, you abused the spell check; poor word choice, i.e. homonyms clutter the first 2 chapters at least, comma use is incorrect.
| Kylemoor chapter 8 . 1/24/2012
I am enjoying this story, though the submissive Naru is a little out of character in my mind. I would much like to see it finished.
| Warlord-Xana chapter 7 . 9/13/2011
VERY GREAT! we need more naruko yuri!
| WolfDragonGod chapter 8 . 9/7/2011
a little strange but good none the less i can't wait to read more
| BleachedRed chapter 8 . 7/31/2010
Nice story, please update it soon! You can't leave us hanging like that... well you could if you didn't have a soul... but your not like that are you... right?... right? T_T
| Xilore chapter 8 . 4/19/2010
Okay, I'm going with technical first.
While most of the story is written properly I have to wonder if you are reading it yourself when you are done. Most of the words are spelled correctly, but may not be the correct word. Work on that, I haven't yet read a chapter w/o these errors. One example was using aloud instead of allowed. said the same, but very different meanings. Hope that little bit of critique helps.
This is the part where I give my opinion of the story idea, plot, character development ect... I'll keep it simple and remember that this is my own personal opinion. I don't much like it. I can kind of understand 'Naru' being a little scared and worried about her current situation, and having Kyubi do that is interesting. However, and this is only my opinion, but I think the interaction with Temari is... well, I don't think it is very much in character with either of them. Not much is known about Temari in private, so you have license to write her this way. I just don't agree with it. As I said though, only my opinion.
From an objective POV though, your story thus far is well structured. Could use a little work on the changes from one point of view to another so it is easier to see. Good luck in your writing!
| librarycat9 chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
...it seems odd that Naru would be scared of sexual things specifically... Naruto was by all appearences a complete innocent to many of those types of things... and now having his mind wiped it is interesting that she knows so clearly what could happen...