|Reviews for Thirteen Last Breaths|
| Payprklip chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
I wasn't prepared for this!
| hanareader chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I'm slightly confused. Although this story is very well done I'm not comprehending Galbatorix's motives. Why would he kill the only female dragon (Saphira) left alive? That doesn't make sense if he hopes to obtain all the Eldunari... Or maybe he just wanted Saphira's Eldunari? hmm...
| jackfrostsplushrump chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
that was sooooo sad!
| TangerineTea chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Terribly, terribly sad, but all the more beautiful for it. Murtagh and Eragon's 'escape' at the end broke my heart. Wonderful work.
| SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Good God. This is one of the most fantastic piece of tragedy, angust and romance packed together! Poor Thorn... Go crazy with me? Screw sanity. That filled a blank heart with color! X3
| Semjaza chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
This had me in tears. It's so distressing. Very well written, but now... I've got to go read something happy to get these images out of my mind. Amazing writing, though. :)
| Demonic Angel Yaoi-luv chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
That...was so sad...*sob*. It was beautifly written and so adorable. Saphira and Thorn dying, then Eragon and Murtagh...so sad...*whimpering cuz its so sad*. This is deffinatly my new favorite story...*anime tears*.
| Kit-Kat-AnGeL chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
OMGGG THEY DIED? And there I was thinking they'd make it out alive! TT_TT And Saphira died, and Arya died...WAAAGH! I hope the sequel is happier :/
| Tess Spoom chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
At a loss for words, here.
Yeah. So that's the best I can do. There ya go.
| Nagini Potter chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Wow. Simply wow. That was a wonderful story! I burst into tears when I reached the end. That was one of the most emotionally moving fan fiction's I've read in a while.
| I'm-not-here-HONEST chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Depressing but maybe they can be happier now... TT_TT Really good story!
| oONekoEdOo chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
If I wasn't in school I would have cried... IT'S SO SAD! But Mur-Mur and Era deserves the best! It's better for them on the other side
| Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Depressing end, but an enjoyable (if twisted) trip getting there. :)
| AnimeKeepsBreathing chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
aw so cute!
| phoenixandtiger chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
oh my god, i love this story. like romeo and juliet, but more dark and sad...
you know, there's too little dark and sad stories these days...think i'll go read some more.