Reviews for Seven
LizzieAliceBlack chapter 7 . 1/1/2009
i love ur story so far! its sorta a cliffhanger at the

though but thats okay...for now. so please please

update really soon; i'm so curious on whats going to

happen. Happy New Year!
cklovewinter chapter 6 . 1/1/2009
Hey, new reader here :)

I have to say I'm loving your story and I'm really curious to know what the Volturi want from them.

By the way, I love you Clary/Jace stories too, they're so addicting! Can't wait for more!

Love, Carol xx
xxx-Its-All-About-Me-xxx chapter 7 . 12/22/2008
wow is there going to be more?I loved that story
xxx-Its-All-About-Me-xxx chapter 6 . 12/22/2008
your probably getting tired of hearing this but i LOVEDit
xxx-Its-All-About-Me-xxx chapter 5 . 12/22/2008
the last line mad me laugh...i was awsome..cant wait to read more!
xxx-Its-All-About-Me-xxx chapter 4 . 12/22/2008
OMG im on the verg of crying(pardon my horable spelling)I LOVED IT
xxx-Its-All-About-Me-xxx chapter 3 . 12/22/2008
WOW thats all have to say WOW...ok andOMG
xxx-Its-All-About-Me-xxx chapter 2 . 12/22/2008
WOW i LOVED it.i was suprised edward didnt kill jacob when he kissed her up in her room...but i LOVED IT!
xxx-Its-All-About-Me-xxx chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
OJisSweet chapter 7 . 12/19/2008
this is a really good story hury up with the next chapter...
Esmi76 chapter 7 . 12/11/2008
Okay so I started reading this story this morning and I am so jonesing for the next chapter! i really like it, ok no i kinda love it lol
GabbyandtheCullenboys chapter 7 . 12/9/2008
Please update!
GabbyandtheCullenboys chapter 7 . 12/9/2008
I love it so much!

My #1 Story!
thesunshinekid chapter 7 . 12/8/2008
I just discovered this story, and I've fallen in love. I haven't seen a post-Breaking Dawn Jacob/Nessie story that has actually appealed to me and sucked me in so much. You've nailed the Jacob characterization, got the right balance in Edward's acceptance and overprotection, and Nessie seems really realistic. You're a skilled writer, and your style is engaging but not over simplified. Your chapter lengths are long enough to chew on but not so long that I have to carve an hour out of my time to read it.

I do have one critique: it felt like the issue with the Volturi really came from left field. Meyer always gave us a lot of heads up about what was coming, in the form of tension and foreshadowing. We were sitting in Forks, happily in the middle of Jake and this established issue with his and Nessie's relationship, then very quickly we have to change our focus to Italy and the goings on there. Obviously, that part being already written I know that this doesn't do you much good as a critique, but perhaps can inform your writing in the future.

I'd prod gently (you know, with a cattle iron) for an update, but I see that you're a NaNoWriter, and instead I extend to you my full sympathies and pray for a speedy recovery.

- thesunshinekid
Sydney chapter 7 . 12/5/2008
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