|Reviews for Lost Soul|
| appezonstrike chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Spelling, grammar, and sentence structure are very important in how good a story is. I would suggest spell checking your work, and getting a beta reader.
| Scarease chapter 8 . 4/3/2014
It had potential sad you did not continue.
| mariexmarieclosedaccount chapter 3 . 12/18/2013
On the previous chapter it was Rukia.
In this chapter, it's Rangiku.
| Mistress Steff chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
This is really good, u should continue ir
| Aisilinn chapter 2 . 11/14/2011
CHAPPY... not so awsome...
| OSR fanatic chapter 8 . 10/23/2011
I like story. -.-" But the chapters are TOO SHORT!
| valkyriecain2110 chapter 8 . 7/31/2011
This is pretty good :) If you want, I would be willing too beta for you. About the Academy . . . (it's actually Shino Academy, not Shinigami)
"The Academy's curriculum is taught over six-years, though exceptionally gifted students have been known to graduate from the academy in less time than this, such as Kaien Shiba and Gin Ichimaru. In addition to a more general education, the pupils are taught how to control and make use of their Spiritual Energy, as well as the four major Shinigami combat forms of Hakuda, Hohō, Kidō and Zanjutsu. Students also learn how to perform Soul Burials, learning to communicate with the spirit of their Zanpakutō and are prepared for the general duties of a Shinigami." - .com
The (known) instructors are:
and Gengoro Onabara
Sorry about the long review
| SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 8 . 3/20/2011
Ichigo is a proper Shinigami now? Will there be a pairing? Will he have a rank like Captain?
| animelover1993 chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
I LOVE THIS! It's definitely an interesting take on the story.
ON TO CHAPTER 2!1
| PaperNPencil chapter 8 . 10/11/2010
| zZemoKITTYzZ chapter 8 . 5/22/2010
i rely like this story update soon plx n_n
| Yin7 chapter 8 . 12/17/2009
| DraGooNia chapter 8 . 9/14/2009
| GRIMMtheBITCH'1 chapter 8 . 7/15/2009
| Space Odin chapter 8 . 7/5/2009
all right sorta hoping the story is gonna beef up some and go from good to excellent.