|Reviews for Checkmate|
| Everintruiged chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Would it be wierd if I said that a friend of mine I actually did the same thing that Emmett did to break the ice? Jesus Christ, one of my times, my friend actually dropped a pin...
I'm a freak. haha
But, yeah, the story's fantastic! Great start!
| mollykins chapter 4 . 11/12/2008
edward is so sweet:)
| Shaeya Sedjet chapter 13 . 11/12/2008
I expected more closure than what you gave us. It seems unfinished. It seems rushed. I feel cheated. You had this great story, all this wonderful build up and the end is totally anti-climactic. And I don't like that we saw the final moments through Emmet's eyes. The chapter is just...weird. Maybe I'm the only one, but it's left me very dissatisfied. *pouty face*
| twilight2441476 chapter 13 . 11/12/2008
ahh i loved it! u ended it at the perfect moment! good job!
| Phantom-writer3739 chapter 13 . 11/12/2008
be a happy welsh bunny.
do you...would you...
please, please, PLEASE...
write a little lemon?
for this story...
cause really, even just a little one would do.
it doesn't even have to be attatched. but i think you could make a lot of people VERY happy.
| jinjin9208 chapter 13 . 11/12/2008
:) that was adorably painfull. Bells being so stubborn and Edward loving her so much. -sigh-
Loved your writing style, made the story even more readable
| Marie Meyers chapter 13 . 11/12/2008
That's it? It was so good! Totally Stephanie Meyer material! Hey, this should be T instead of M though...but 7 star rating!
| twilight-is-lovee chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
It was cute. But, I think it woulda been better if you had Edward or Bella's POV and show them kiss that way, and show them confess their love for each other.
| Slide.Tackled chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
what? no sequal? nothing?
| riotgirllina chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
Super cute story
| CassieB chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
| polyphany chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
Amazing, fabulous, fantastic, awesome ending! I absolutely loved the story! ;-)
| Mally9 chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
Aw, so cute! And I'm glad Mike is gonna be beaten up, haha!
| Kimmie43 chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
That's It? your done? I was hoping a chapter where they speak their feelings and more. I didn't know you end it like this. I'm kind of disappointed. I wanted more.
| mercedesfrk1121 chapter 13 . 11/11/2008
awesome end to an awesome story...great job...can't wait to read ur next one!