Reviews for Checkmate
SweetNonsense chapter 13 . 10/28/2009
its a good story...i didnt like the way uv ended it. i mean it doesnt show how bella felt being WITH edward or theirfirst kiss...i liked it though :P
mariecullen since1918 chapter 13 . 10/10/2009
very good story but it should have been a little longer but besides that it was an excellent story.
jazzcrank chapter 13 . 9/29/2009
yes they kissed im so dam happy this is gonna be a good day today:)
jazzcrank chapter 12 . 9/29/2009
aww so bella is now for sure she wants edward im so happy
jazzcrank chapter 11 . 9/28/2009
hahaha loved all 3 of the girls drooling over the boys i have to say i thought bella's was the funniest with the whole x thing
jazzcrank chapter 10 . 9/28/2009
loved edwards fantasies of bella and uggh bella notice edward that he likes u how can u not
twilight rules xx chapter 4 . 9/28/2009
hey i havrn't read much so far but what i have read i liked
jazzcrank chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
hot chapter and uggh bella whyed u do that to poor edward and urself
jazzcrank chapter 8 . 9/28/2009
aw bella has 3 protecters and aw edward cares alot for bella but bella being so stubborn cant see it or her feelings for edward
jazzcrank chapter 7 . 9/28/2009
aw i love bella and edward in this story
jazzcrank chapter 5 . 9/27/2009
jazzcrank chapter 3 . 9/26/2009
aw edward protecting bella love this story
jazzcrank chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
ok im kinda confused about wat happened when edwards pov started and love there checkmate game
jazzcrank chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
aw and haha
Rawr Ashley Rae chapter 13 . 9/23/2009
to me it doesn't feel done... sequal?
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