absolutely adorable! spot on characterization, and hte bits of sheyla in there only made it better! thanks for writing such a spectacular mckeller fic! (god knows we need more around here lol) ) ) )

Well-written, good fun. I was especially fond of a very minor element - the descriptive preoccupation with her burns and dressings. I think that sort of raises the stakes for the reader and reminds them of how dire the situation really was, which makes Rodney's and Jen's exchanges more poignant.

Oh! That's adorable! I love it! Awesome story!

This was adorable. Sheppard's comforting and little supportive gestures to Teyla were perfectly in character. Rodney's thoughts on them were great. I love brave Rodney. Nice to see. And not one complaint about being ill or injured throughout the entire thing! Thanks for sharing this. Sequel? Please?

Great story..

When he needs to Rodney can come through for people and he did it here for Jennifer..

I liked the subtle things with John and Teyla as well.. and I like the idea of Rodney and Jennifer..they are somehow different when they are dealing with eachother then with others..

Great work..

awesome! i loved it!

Aww! love the ending. Great story :D