Reviews for Bonded
Lostmemories203 chapter 7 . 9/3/2008
o0o boy! I really hope Joyce can get through 2 Dawn. Like really. Cuz wit the way this iz goin, it dont look 2 good 4 the really need a break. Especially Buffy an Faith. Luvin it! Plz update soon!
Lupo669 chapter 7 . 9/3/2008
Thanks for the update. It seems like Buffy and Faith are gonna have their hands full trying to win back Dawn's trust. Faith must be going nuts thinking of how easy it was for her to lash out at everything when she felt alienated. She's probably imagining all the possible ways Dawn could rebel and end up really hurting herself or someone else.

So, Buffy's getting over the freak factor where Giles and Joyce are concerned? They do seem to be good for each other.

With two very on edge slayers out, I kinda pity any vamps, demons, or Glory's acolytes that they come across. Especially if Faith loses it and goes all Dark Slayer on them...

Please keep posting!
Lupo669 chapter 6 . 8/31/2008
Thanks for the long chapter it was great!

At least Dawn talked to Buffy and Faith some more when they went back to the hospital. Even if she was extreamly cold, which is to be expected this soon.

Everybody seemed to take the news that Dawn is the "Key" pretty well. After being told, did they start remembering they couldn't remember her from before?

Anya was a good choice to further their information on Glory and the background story you gave for her was really well thought out.

Faith's nicknames are just prefect. So far we have Dusk, Terror and Carrots right? What about Xander?

It was a great idea having Faith be the one to bring to thier attention that they were talking about killing an innocent person just to get rid of Glory. Her remorse and determination not to ever go down that path again really came through.

Can't wait for the next update...
lilyme chapter 6 . 8/31/2008
Huh, I thought Buffy and Faith weren't gonna tell the others...

Oh, right, Faith has died. What did we decide on the "there's-a-third-slayer-out-there-front"? I forgot :)

Anya's explanation is cool. Really well thought out! Wonder how long it'll take before they figure out who the host is. Hope Dawn won't happen to walk along the Psych ward with Ben in tow...
Lostmemories203 chapter 6 . 8/30/2008
O0o man! Thatz jus woow! Soo Happy that u posted the Whole chapter! SO the host iz Ben though! How the hell r they gonna beat Glory? Thiz iz really awesome! Luvin it! Plz update soon!
lilyme chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
Yeah, what does this being made from two slayers make Dawn...mystically (apart from a key)? Hm...

I don't think Faith was too rough with Dawn... okay, maybe a little, but she needed to be. And it's good they have gotten through to Dawn a little.

It would be interesting to see one of Dawn's interviews with the psychologist in here, just to see what she (Dawn) might tell her :)
Lostmemories203 chapter 5 . 8/27/2008
wow! Wut a conversation. If u could call it that. REally Luvin it! Plz update soon!
liljemsey chapter 5 . 8/27/2008
i liked the chapter

i hope b/f don't do any smooching because all the hospital staff think they are sisters!

hope you update soon i love this sotry
Lupo669 chapter 5 . 8/27/2008
Interesting chapter. I figured it would be up to Faith to get Dawnie to pay attention to what they had to say and I could totally see Faith doing it the way you described.

Dawn's reaction to Buffy and Faith seemed a little plastic. She appeared to be acting more like a petulant child, rather than having the righteous indignation I would expect from someone who believes themselves betrayed by the people they love.

Dawn's reactions did seem to be more natural after Ben came into the room though.

Also, I'm a little confused about what Buffy meant by this line...

“All right, Dawn, well, we’ll see you then,” Buffy told her quietly, “talk about this a little me, okay?”

It comes right after Ben comes in the room and tells Buffy and Faith they have to leave.

Overall though, this chapter does move the story along and opens up the way for future talks between Buffy, Faith and Dawn.

Please keep posting...
Lostmemories203 chapter 4 . 8/25/2008
o0o boy! I'm soo curious as 2 how the converstion iz gonna go. Or if there will b any conversation at all. Luvin it! Plz update soon!
Lupo669 chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
Don't worry about taking your time to fill in the group dynamics. I'm really liking the way you're developing the back story. In Once Burned and Comalies, everything was told pretty much from Buffy's perception of what was going on. I like that in this story Faith's character/personality has a more active role. It's a pleasure watching Faith's interaction/responses to everyone around her.

So, since your so good at character relationships...

Is Dawn going to fall for her male nurse (Ben)?

Are you going to explore more of the Giles/Joyce dynamic?

Are you gonna bring the rest of the Scoobies in on the "Key" secret?

How's Jana making out over in England?

Where's Wesley been hiding?

So many questions, so little time...

Thanks again and please keep the chapters coming...
lilyme chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
so the psychologist is a he... hm, what's his name? :P

Ah, okay, so, no to that thought I had on who the psycholohist might be... probably

Nothing wrong with "nothing happens" chapters :)
lilyme chapter 3 . 8/22/2008
Buffy herself taking full responsibility for what happened to Dawn? :( I bet Faith won't let her...

Now, Joyce... hm, did I expect her to react like this or not? i'm not entirely sure; it's cool either way :)

Owwiiee... my feet hurt just from reading that... :O

So, I wonder if Buffy and Faith will talk some more about Buffy taking all the blame, and about Faith not telling Buffy about her injured feet. And I wonder what will happen if they/when get they the chance to talk to Dawn... I have a feeling it's not gonna be pretty. And the Dawn has to talk to a shrink bit... now that could be interesting. Oh...Oh...! I have an idea who the shrink might be! Hehe ... Psst, two people, or one... or one can turn into the other... or...
liljemsey chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
another awesome chapter

i literally shuddered when you described the glass going deeper into faith's foot as she walked

and a little bit of giles/joyce love thats cute

can't wait to see what happens next
cbbred chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
Amazing story you've got here! I love it!

I dont know though, Buffy is a little more idk I guess "freaked-out" then I thought she would normally act. I understand the difference with Faith being in the picture, but I think she should still have some sort of calm to her like what is shown in the series. Just my two cents.
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