Reviews for Midnight
Kiba Blackfire chapter 1 . 6/30
I love that you used very little "this" in the fiction and still got a fantastic lemon. Keep it up. You are awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8
I loved this :) good job. Maybe, exclude the harsh language like, "God, just fuck me," and "cock." These harsh words and phrases are not very sexy. But, the rest of it was very well written and even arousing. I love Sasuke and Sakura, and loved what you did with one of my favorite pairings.
Free Mentality chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
Very hot, and very nice!
It was clear that these two have intense sexual chemistry, and throwing in the little affections at the end of their enthusiastic romp was a lovely little touch to it. Sasuke, a person who doesn't generally express his feelings, obviously loves her, and you expertly portrayed his love without any dialogue, and that's absolutely wonderful.
Thank you for sharing!
Jeanne1900 chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
mhhhhh loved it :)
JJ chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
That was amazing. Keep up the good work. :)
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
PWP, what's not to love about that, right? haha. Love Sasuke's little arrogance and hint of tenderness.
AntwSpring chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
I love it. Very well written..
SARCASTIC BITCH chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?! YOU SHOULD NEVER WRITE A LEMON AGAIN.
Lullamasen chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
wow simply amazing!
Random Chick chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Hot! But a little more foreplay wouldn't have hurt.
Taryn Myst chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
*Dabbing at nosebleed* I may need to reread that to determine its quality. Please Call 911 when I do.

Awesome oneshot as always! Yay!
Mundane Melodies chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
AWW that was ...uhm...sexy? lol

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SHINOBY12 chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
not bad do u think u could write another?
Holly chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
LOVED IT!
zetsuboukatt chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
This is the best Lemon story ever

XD
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