I always wondered how Ian and Kyle and basically everyone else got to the caves. I like your perspective on how they could've got there. And like I said in the last review, I hope you write a long story with kyle and jodi/sunny.

Great characterization, and your writing flows well.

poor kyle! you know, i never really stopped to think how bitter he got after he lost jodi. good perspective i guess. you do well writing from his POV

Whoa...that was really good. I hope to read more from you in the future.

woah, that is so sad .

poor kyle .

i love it!

That was really good. I wish you would continue this in some way. You do a great job from Kyle's perspective.

This was beautifully written. You did a great job!