|Reviews for Not A Human, Not A Unicorn|
| TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 8/17
It was truly interesting! It makes me really curious as to what is the daughter's place in the world. At least the unicorn knows she is a human even if part of her soul isn't anymore, but Molly is a whole different creature. I wonder how she would interact more with other centaurs, kind of wish you had included her conversation with the centaur here.
| prolixius5 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I remember coming across that movie when I was living in the States, ages ago, and I truly loved it. I really enjoyed what you wrote here. Delicate style, fluid, so logically linked to the original story. Thanks for sharing.
| Ramona chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
It is very sad and short...
you made me cry...
you could at least change it so lir would come back or something like that...
you said you liked happy endings!
anyway, i loved spirited away 2! And i want you to continue that story...
Give me an e-mail (if you have) to say what will you do...
| WyldClaw chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
that was simply beautiful. I liked how you set molly apart from other centaurs by making her have a unicorn's body (the name unitar has such a wonderful ring to it) as well as letting her have human emotions.
i think it was wonderful how Amalthea told molly about liir
| Geas Qwen chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Awsum! That was outstanding!
So sweet & emoshuml I like that.
I loved evry minit of this your so talinted.
I too loved this movie as a kid.
I just read the secwull story Tow Heart's onlin.
I hope to read mor of your story's.
| DearTestament chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Oh, that was a neat, touching story.
| Atem's Sister Atea chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
I remember seeing that movie when I was still a kid. I always thought that Amalthea belonged with Lir. It's so sad that they could'nt be together! *cries amine style*
| sotroublesomeST chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
i thought it was very good. i loved how you named the child after Molly the story itself was very thought out and you kept well with the charactors. great job! and i'm a last unicorn fanatic too, it's also was one of my fave movies as a kid, and still do
| Xepher06 chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
I really REALLY like it! enjoyed it very much!
| Lasgalendil chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
I too, am dealing with a past obsession with the Last Unicorn! I watched the movie as a child and read the book for the first time as an adult-and it is a thousand times more magical than the movie ever was, even as a kid.
You did an excellent job of echoing the author's and movie's descriptions of a unicorn. Your summary of the story through dialogue was very powerful.
I don't know how I feel about Lir and Amalthea getting together and having a kid. The closest I can think of is good science fiction: accept the author's strange premise, and the rest of the story flows. However, it's not my work, but yours, and you did it beautifully. Do I like it? Dislike it? I don't know. It's like eating foreign food-it's just different.
Some constructive criticism/confusion with "But I knew he couldn't be killed. Unlike immortals such as you and I, he was something else. Something that truly was eternal." If the Red Bull is eternal, shouldn't we be talking about him in the present tense? You used "never fights...conquers...doesn't fight." Why is he suddenly in the past?
Keep writing! I am looking forward to reading more of your stories!
| Jollipop chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I liked it )
| leyi666 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Well, I haven't actually watched the Last Unicorn, but I think you summarised it quite well. The story is very emotional and I like it XD