Reviews for Kai's Diary
TitanWolf chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
this was awful you didn't capture Kai's character at all. i am severly dissappointed.
QuotethTheRaveneth chapter 10 . 2/1/2009
This is a good story! I like how you keep Kai in character! If it's ok i'd like to give you an idea...Maybe you could have an army from a different tribe staying at the school temperarily, and Kai meets a soldier the same age as her and she could fall in love with him...just an idea...I think Kai should have a love interest...hope the idea helps!


SageEmpress chapter 3 . 8/23/2008