Reviews for Marked
FuN FiFi chapter 23 . 7/14
What an unbelievable sequel! I'm amazed beyond words with how you've created a magical (excuse the pun lol) HP universe where good did triumph over evil but at a heavy price (just like real life). Your versions of canon characters, especially Harry, Hermione, Dumbledore, and Neville were extremely well-written! For me, your characterization of Hermione was the best I've read in HP fanfic; Harry came a close second. In addition, your superb action/romance/drama-driven plot kept me guessing until the very last chapter as to how your story would end! And wow what a spectacular finish that was! :-D

I hope you decide to write more multi-chartered HHr fics in the near future. Your talent is undeniable; you should definitely write more!

Keep up the GREAT work!
Guest chapter 23 . 3/20
This was awesome! Wonderfully written. It felt like J K rowing her self wrote it. So far the best F F story iv read
Vegasman59 chapter 23 . 2/6
Excellent, Pair of stories I loved it so much I had to just keep going after the first!
HP.HG. fan forever chapter 3 . 5/26/2014
I just read the prequel to this and at the end and at the beginning of this you have Raven thinking of Snape as her hero. But in the early part of the previous story she agreed with Harry and that she and her mother needed to get away from Snape. At least that was the impression I got.
The Ghostly Minion chapter 23 . 3/4/2014
A wonderful ending for a wonderful, intense and at times heartbreaking saga.

My life has bee enriched by reading it. Thanks.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 22 . 3/4/2014
I can hardly bear to look at the next chapter. Well done!
The Ghostly Minion chapter 18 . 3/4/2014
Glad some thing got resolved.
The Ghostly Minion chapter 14 . 3/4/2014
OK, I think I'm up to speed on this.

1. Bellatrix is doing a Quirrel, or perhaps a step beyond that.

2. Harry WILL NOT let Neville get taken alone, if he can humanly prevent it.

3. Hermione's fall back for Harry is to send home back to the fight in the Ministry. I hope she knows Harry will not allow that. For better or worse he will be at her side, and she at his. I would not be at all surprised if Harry doesn't propose to her before the last fight. I think most of the above holds for Neville and Lavender too.

4. The DA WILL NOT let Harry and Neville play the last hand alone.

5. Draco is an ally "for the duration", maybe longer.

6. Thank you for redeeming Dumbledore. We saw the canonical Albus in this chapter.

As always, your writing is top drawer.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 10 . 3/4/2014
I'm glad that it seems relationship issues are resolving themselves-for the present. The subplot with Draco is interesting.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 7 . 3/4/2014
"Keep your friend close, your enemies closer and your loved ones closest of all".

I am so glad Hermione's Birthday went the way I hoped (and I'll take that gold star now!). 8)

I loved the humor in the Quidditch code. It was hilarious.

I am sorry for the strain between Lavender and Neville, although it was inevitable. Does Harry still have the pensieve? He needs to give them access to his memories, and maybe Hermione's as well.

At this point, what is the condition of the other Harry?

I'm thinking that Harry and Neville need two more wands, both as backups and to learn two-handed defense. Would Dumbledore spare two more of Fawkes' feathers so Olivander can make wands as close to their own as possible?

I know that Albus-bashing is popular; not saying you are doing so here. But having read enough Fics now, I see a commonality in the way he is treated. None of the Fics portray Dumbledore with the humanity JKR does in canon. No, canon Dumbledore is not at all perfect and make his fair share of mistakes and more. But no one can doubt his love for Harry.

Also, for this story, he is minister. He has much more on his plate than two students' lives. I think his motivations would be far different were he still Headmaster. Still, here, he is minister and he will place the welfare of Britain ahead of two students and will sacrifice their lives for a sure kill of Voldemort.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 6 . 3/4/2014
Magnificent. It might sound dumb to feel so happy for a couple of fictional character, but I do.

For all the pain and worry and fear they have been through, this is a more then deserved reward. For all the fear, pain, worry and terror they still have to face, this will be the immovable anchor grounding them.

D. Page Robin
The Ghostly Minion chapter 4 . 3/4/2014
If "today" isn't Hermione's Birthday, then it should be in the next few "days". I think it would be a great gift from Harry if he were to tell her then that he loves her, that he is sorry for all he has put her through since they met, and promised to talk to her and to follow her advice in the future.

However, that is a forlorn hope right?

I think it is also time for Neville and Lavender to start taking a trip down Harry's Memory Lane.

A heart start to another gorgeous story ((or it's continuation, I should say). Thank you.

D. Page Robin
FreelanceBum chapter 21 . 11/24/2013
Man, I was so sure they mind blanked the time clone body, and were going to shove these memories from the orb into the time clone.

The horcrux is interesting, but as with canon I can't help but feel it is too damn easy to make these things. Voldemort did it by accident, twice.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2013
Draco overhearing the conversation is somewhat out of ordinary.
I would assume hermione or harry to use security spells to avoid overhearing.
It does not seem reasonable when overhearing of this type did not happen at all in last story (when snape and others were trying to track harry) and suddenly draco seem to do it easily.
Kittencat3 chapter 18 . 5/13/2013
Errr ... one bone to pick. The age of consent TODAY in the UK is 16, but in the 1990s (in which the series is set), it was 14 for boys.
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