Reviews for Marked
RavenclawRebel chapter 10 . 11/25/2008
This is an amazing plot line! I don't know whether Draco or Dumbledore can be trusted... This Dumbledore isn't the happy and serene one like the Dumbledore we're used to. Great job!
RavenclawRebel chapter 9 . 11/25/2008
this is AMAZING!
RavenclawRebel chapter 7 . 11/25/2008
this Dumbledore is mean! Great job!
RavenclawRebel chapter 5 . 11/21/2008
I love it!
RavenclawRebel chapter 4 . 11/21/2008
this is so good!
RavenclawRebel chapter 3 . 11/15/2008
I like this! Don't really like Lily, though. I understand how she feels and all, but still! Will we ever get to see Tonks' memory?
RavenclawRebel chapter 2 . 11/15/2008
I love it already! This is awesome!
Primus2021 chapter 12 . 11/15/2008
So far so good, but it is a bit CRAZY everywhere you look in this fic,

So far my fav chapter is 6, funny & Limony SWEET,


DualX chapter 12 . 11/11/2008
Uhm... i kinda forgot what happend... Since i just needed to add and stuff xD so i forget, ill make it up to you by making a better review at next chapter
witowsmp chapter 12 . 11/5/2008
If Draco is clever in this story, he'll realize that he should stop helping Bella. Otherwise, no matter how much he helps her, she'll always threaten Narcissa if Draco hesitates to fulfil his latest orders from him.
respitechristopher chapter 12 . 10/27/2008
Okay, so I'm wicked late on the reviewing. But it's a bridge chapter, and in reviewing, those always seem to be the most difficult.

Nonetheless, in re-re-reading it, I must say I'm completely in awe of your Lavender-Hermione scene. You could have turned it into a hair-pulling catfight, you could have turned it into instant BFFs or even create somekind of alliance between the two girls, but you created a rather uneasy detente between two characters that just don't like each other too terribly much. And did it in a way that's believable and almost voyeuristically fun to read.

Another thing I dig about your story is the language. I've commented on this before, but your lyrical style is so close to the tenor the author sets in canon, and it adds to the idea of these two stories being an alternative telling of the Potter mythos, rather than simply a fanfiction. That's a rather roundabout way of saying "pretty words nice to read."

I don't think I've ever said this in a review before, and I'll probably never say it again, but I want to see more Draco. His brooding has become quite an interesting refrain on your chapters, and I'd love to see him explored more indepth.
gravacor chapter 8 . 10/23/2008
I think you did a good job relaying all the mixed feelings of getting rid of the "other Harry". I think Hermione might have been a bit foolish if she thought it wouldn't be. Loved the update.
gravacor chapter 6 . 10/22/2008
I wish that she had been awake to hear that statement. I think he choose the right time to make his feelings felt.
gravacor chapter 5 . 10/22/2008
I just finished Free Will from another site and really enjoyed. Granted, I almost didn't read it. I haven't liked too many of the going back in time stories. I wanted an opinion on something. Lilly is concerned that Hermione might want Harry for something other than Harry, there is also the concern of did she really feel for the other Harry what she did.

Hermione made the comment, I believe in Free Will she made the comment "I choose you" referring to this Harry. I like the answer, but how can she say that if she was in love with the other one for so much longer?

This is an awesome story so far and I am really enjoying it.
Fibinaci chapter 12 . 10/20/2008
I love your Ron, so dense. Nice as well was how Hermione told him how to fix things. And it was sweet for Harry to be jealous of some other bloke making Hermione laugh, it shows he isnt taking her for granted.
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