|Reviews for Torikoshi Kurou|
| hiyouri chapter 1 . 3/19
Really love the story, hope to see an update to it some time:)
| silverwolfigther00 chapter 13 . 2/19
This story is just so exiting and interesting XD it is just so great to read,
hope that you will update this one sometime, looking forward to it,
| TheDishThatRanAwayWithTheSpoon chapter 7 . 1/22
| FreeDomsHope chapter 13 . 11/15/2014
Just when I really go into the story, I notice there's no more chapters T_T and it's been 4 years since you last wrote anything. Please continue! I want to see Itachi and Sakura!
| dark-wolf-howl chapter 13 . 6/24/2014
Please tell me the story is not abandoned :(:(:(
I love it and would really love to read the ending
| Bilbord chapter 13 . 1/28/2014
por favor continue, e uma otima historia ;D
| Uchiha-Lady chapter 13 . 11/26/2013
pleeeaaaaaseeeeeee continue this!
| bookluv22 chapter 13 . 11/25/2013
AAAAAAHHHHH! I CAN'T PRESS NEXT! PLEASE COME BACK TO THIS AND UPDATE SOON! It's too good to not be finished.
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 13 . 10/31/2013
| TeamTHEFT chapter 13 . 9/24/2013
Read this and although you haven't updated in forever, I just wanted to say that I loved it. :) That is all. Thanks for helping me survive psychology homework. :) lol
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/26/2013
Continue please! Oh and that's sooo sweet! Yeah NaruHina!
| Trying -Helps chapter 10 . 3/22/2013
Not a bad story line, quiet good actually. I especially like how you made Itachi seem so prideful. It's a realistic flaw that he seems inclined to having. Nice too that Naruto is with Hinata, also making Sasuke just seem, well normal was great. All in all it was good story, well written, with funny characters.
I was wondering if you wouldn't mind taking the good person test. It's a test that shows if you are a good person and how that effects you. It's easy to find, only the second result on a Google search.
| dreamyrai chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
... I really wish you had finished this story...(writing this knowing you won't see it) It's such a great story and you really had my attention... sighs, well we do grow and have our interests change
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/24/2013
Meh. I read this far, but it's just getting stupid what with the elders coming in.
As the person being "challenged", Sakura should call a counter-challenge: one on one duels with Uchiha clan members - and since THEY are the ones asking for her, she gets to choose who to challenge - to resolve the situation. I'd make her pick unwed Uchiha shinobi (other than Itachi) and make her demolish them. Really cream them. As in inflict permanent crippling injuries - I suggest blinding, as it would be the ultimate insult against a doujutsu-based clan - or even death.
The Uchiha can't afford not to respond either, since honour duels obviously predate the founding of Hidden Villages - shit, all that clan vs clan nonsense WAS because of honour. They either have to keep on sending their men for her to maim, or withdraw the whole arranged marriage deal. And they can't get angry with Sakura either because all that shit would be of their own doing. As the saying goes, if you can't walk the walk then don't fucking talk the talk.
I'd love to see her brutalize (admittedly, as she's a medic nin I don't quite see her cruel enough to outright kill other Konoha nin) a bunch of male Uchiha until the damage outweighs even their blind stupidity. I think she'd blind and cripple 3-4 Uchiha before they'd start taking her seriously, and mangling several more after that SHOULD serve as the stopping point. I'd like her to also keep loudly harping on why all this is happening and calling out the Uchiha on their bullshit if they complain. You want me? Then fight me, you fucking pansies.
So the "great" Uchiha clan has a fucking doujutsu. That's no license for them to just piss over everybody else, the rest of the goddamn village should see that. Sakura should point this out, that if the Uchiha had their way all the time it means they don't respect the rest of the village and can take whatever they like from anyone - NOT TO MENTION THEIR FUCKING SIGNATURE TRAIT, THE SHARINGAN, EXISTS LITERALLY TO STEAL OTHER PEOPLES' TECHNIQUES. Shit, you pointed out yourself that Tsunade already called them out on fucking Madara.
If they want Sakura they should fucking pay for it, and she should squeeze them hard. Losing several branches of the Uchiha clan should make them stop and fucking think. It'll be hard to support your clan when the stupidity and stubbornness of the clan elders cost you your children. I imagine after Sakura cripples and forces the retirement of several generation of young Uchiha, even assholes like them would reconsider the costs. It'd be especially sweet if she calls out ninja related directly to the clan elders - they need to put their fucking money where their mouths are.
Man, somebody should totally write this.
| dreamssssss chapter 13 . 12/9/2012
I really wish you had finished this story