Reviews for It hurts
NorthernMage chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
Oh, ouch...

*hugs both of them*
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Really nice story. Nice work with the alternating perspectives, it gives a good view of how each character is feeling during the same moment. The ending is so sad. Good work with this story.
karierte chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Bitter.

I shall read it again.
Edward slept with Poison Akii chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I'm going to be honest with you; I didn't think I was going to like it. When I started reading this, I liked your style, though, so I kept reading. And boy am I glad I did. I'm sitting on the couch, crying softly, lost in your story. You've ripped my heart out, stepped on it, and eaten the pieces. But God, I love it.
RazorLike chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
...it hurts to read...
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
The scene where Matt is dying is absolutely perfect.

The way he talks about the chocolate, and how soft mello's hair is, and his last words, and everything just fades, cuts off, whatever-it's perfect.

And gods, I'm crying, but it was beautiful. The entire ending was beautiful.
C Elise chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
veru good story
puddingcup chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
aw! so cute :D yet sad
Ass Victoriam chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
;0 that was so sad... aww...sad but beautiful!

i really loved it.
deactivated3333344543 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
i liked this story it was really great i liked how you described everything and- damn all i can say was that it was great.