|Reviews for More Than Words|
| Hookedonreading chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Hello there! I do know the song "More than Words" and I do believe you did justice to that song with your fic. Although, with Shiz sometimes, I do feel that she needs to hear it from Nat the words but little touches and actions to support her love to Shiz throughout the days.
thanks again for posting and sharing.
| Flamehaze-006shana chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Nice! Very nice story !
| Krystal of Nol chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Ciertamente hay veces en que se necesitan más que palabras, uno pensaría que es increíble que una persona como Natsuki que es más del tipo 'haga ahora, piense después' no lo vea, pero por supuesto teniendo en cuenta como fue su vida es lógico que tenga cero experiencia en el campo que involucra las relaciones humanas. Es bueno que Shizuru y el amor que siente por ella estén allí para enseñarle que a veces las palabras no son suficientes.
Me like it! XD
| Shizuru Fujino de Kuga chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
So cute...*Trying not to cry*
| m chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
beautiful! a very soft n sweet story full of emotions!
| why chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
- I really dont understand why
- You write all your character responses/sentences
- With these annoying dashes
- It's improper grammar as you NEVER see
- This kind of format in books, magazines, newspapers ANYTHING
I REALLY want to read your stories. I really do. But the dashes just KILL it for me. I advice you to stop using the dashes. You don't need them.
"Just right your sentences *normally* like this."
"With quotation marks to denote character speech, *without* the pointless dashes."
| review chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
(- “I’m home.” – said the raven haired girl.
- “Ara Natsuki, welcome back.” – greeted Shizuru – “How was your day?”
- “A bit tiring. I forgot that I had cleaning shift today.”)
Why do you write your stories with those ( - ) in front of the speech sentences? Where in the world did you ever pick that (bad) habit up? Have you ever read a book where the author starts off every speech sentence with a - in front of it. It's HIGHLY distracting, and *completely* takes away from someone wanting to read your stories, which I *do* because they look good, but ugh...the (-) just *totally* ruin it for me.
| Fleadog chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
OK, this is so long overdue n I just have a few minutes from my work break... You are one my faves! I follow your work. N I wish I had enough time to leave a stellar review for you cuz "...saying I love you are not the words U want to hear from me..." lol
Your brillant, beautiful, soulful, n a rockstar -all rolled in 1! Yeah, you!
You've really captured the emotion of the two famed lovebirds with the melody! I certainly cannot picture the actually music vid anymore without remembering what you've wrote. lol...
Then, again, most songs I've come across have become a ShizNat compilation... XD which leaves me to ponder...
May I ask for a song request to be considered for any of your projects... I can't think of another person who can convey a more beautiful tale than thee... This particular song has haunted me for months and it screams ShizNat in my head, heart, n soul... "Gravity" by Sara Bareilles.
Till then, I am awaiting an upcoming day off to shower you with reviews galore... Just you wait! (does that sounds stalker-ish? LOL)
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
This is so true some people need more than words to believe that they're loved. very nice story.
| colorfulsunrise514 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Aww! This was such a cute story! It was all warm and fuzzy.
| Lady Potter chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
| chum-sa chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
i love this song ...oh& i love this story too!
| Master Kosa chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Good fic, as I can expect from you. Sometimes a bit harder to clearly understand, but heartwarming and cute. But one thing was little confusing - in bold italics there is speech or thoughts?
Anyway I'm looking forward for your next story or chapter. Have a good day.
| Shazu chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
this was really cute X3
| fran-chan808 chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
KAWAI! I really love this one-shot fic. i can really picture the whole thing that was going on between Shizuru and Natsuki. Beautiful just beautiful!