Reviews for Two Face
rayvinfay chapter 111 . 2/26
This is an amazing story! You are a great writer. I kind wish there was another chapter when they meet again after years of being apart and then get married in Europe! Anyways beautiful story.
XXxCookie GirlxXX chapter 1 . 2/23
this story seems romantic
Fireball-Fuchsia chapter 3 . 11/25/2014
Is Sasuke going to start being nice to Naruto now?

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Fireball-Fuchsia chapter 2 . 11/25/2014
OMG! Is Naruto starting to feel a teensy weensy bit attracted to Sasuke? Why else didn't he let his friends beat the guy with the duck's butt on his head? And... Hahaha! Are you serious? Neji was luckily carrying around a first aid-kit? Haha! Who carries around a first aid-kit? What a nice friend Shikamaru is. I'm sure Naruto will feel better now that he's away from Sasuke. Oh and I loved how you made the characters in the movie based on Naruto, Itachi, and Sasuke. You get a cookie!

*gives chocolate chip cookie*

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Fireball-Fuchsia chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
I started reading a SasuNaru fic because, I found the summary interesting. So I just finished the first chapter and see that… IT IS 111 chapters/pages long!

Moral of the story is: ALWAYS read how many chapters/pages long a story is BEFORE you start reading it.

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ShadowHybrid5 chapter 111 . 11/16/2014
I can't even begin to say how much I've enjoyed this story, nor how many of the things in this story hit far closer to home than I would have ever expected. Thank you for posting this story; it's officially one of my favorite stories I've ever read, fanfiction or not. This has to be one of the most well-written and well-thought-out stories I've seen in quite some time, and even still would have to rate at the very least in the top 3 in my opinion.

In a note somewhere earlier on, you mentioned that you get a lot of people who say that they read it even despite high school fics not being something they ever enjoy or read, and I have to say that I've never been interested in one before. Typically, those are just an excuse to make something happen or throw themselves more easily into the story. A lot of them seem fake or have no real plot and are rarely completed. I think what sets this apart is how deeply it delves into the emotions behind the relationships of the characters. You did an amazing job capturing all of the emotion, and I lot count of the number of times it made me cry, happy or sad. That's pretty impressive considering I started reading this story late 2 nights ago. I admit I stayed up very late that night, read for 6 or so hours until 4 in the morning when I could barely keep my eyes open and made it through 30 or 40 chapters and then got up 5 hours later to keep reading.

From the story, I think I have an idea what would happen in the future, but if you see this and have the time, I'd really like a summary or overview of where you saw everything going. The somewhat sad, yet happy ending leaves me wanting a little more closure on that.

The only criticism I have for this story is that despite how many characters are involved, some of them got little to no attention, even in scenes they were present for. Like Neji or Hinata, who all but disappeared in the second year, and even in the first year were not as involved as it seemed. I was extremely curious about Sai's past, and I had hoped to find out what could pass as the real-life equivalent and am somewhat disappointed to not know when it sounded like it may come up again in the future. The one thing in this story that was confusing was that all of the characters belonged in Konoha except Gaara and there was never an explanation as to why he was present in the story at all except as another jinchuuriki/for the plot. I feel like there could have been an interesting side-story there to be shown in the beginning of the story.

I am kind of disappointed that Itachi never actually made a real appearance in the story and that it was never resolved. I suppose when this story was started, Itachi hadn't been revealed in the anime as having actually been a good guy, but there could be a really interesting story with quite a few plot twists with a confrontation, and an explanation in this universe as to what would have made him do it and not be an evil psychopath would have been fascinating.

This will be my first time posting a review signed in, and probably only my second or third even including anonymous reviews.
I really loved this story, and I will definitely be re-reading it in the future. Thank you so much for sharing.
Chark chapter 111 . 11/4/2014
Okay. So I know this is a relatively old story, but I just found it recently, and at first I was thinking "111 Chapters? What could possibly take that long?", but I gave it a shot anyways. And let me tell you, that was one of the best decisions I ever made. It sounds so weird to say, honestly, but this story was utterly amazing. Just beautiful. Every single thing about it was indefinitely perfect. The style of writing, and just the actual plot was insanely amazing! I don't know how you do it! I read at least 3 chapters every night if not 7, haha, and I enjoyed every single minute of it. When they broke up or fought I believe I cried because the writing was just so great. The ending was especially amazing, but overall this story was just... well I dont know how to describe it. Amazing. Just amazing. Keep on writing! You will get far in life! And thank you! Thanks for giving me something to look forward to at after school and on the weekends and for never letting me down with your writing!
TheNinjaFromYesterday chapter 4 . 10/31/2014
I love it when it's in Sasuke's POV!
XD1411 chapter 14 . 10/23/2014
he has literature (ew)
Why does Naruto say ew? He's the one who has biology; isn't that the one where you cut living creatures to pieces? Shouldn't he be saying ew about his own class? :/

"Now who's going to crying to whom, eh, uke-chan?" he says.; Do you mean go crying? Or take away the ing.

It's not just about you and me. It would be so much easier if we could just be left
/Right/ here I got the feeling something bad will happen on their way home. _
XD1411 chapter 13 . 10/23/2014
It's not like being gay is a big taboo or anything, but it's not exactly normal, is it?"
Yes it is, Naruto. If it wasn't normal no-one would be been born gay.

translates almost exactly to "pitcher" and "uke" (oo-keh); I think uke is pronounced you-key.

but this is a fairly relaxed fic and I was raised in North America.
What does the place you were raised at got to do with this fic?
Datcray chapter 111 . 10/16/2014
This story had me hooked till the end. I hated takeshi at time v.v and I felt so bad for shi . but all the problems that they face. This story was just AMAZING! When they broke up it had me torn I couldn't handle it especially cause I didn't know what sasuke was thinking ahhh anyways I'm rambling. This was a splendid story though and I would love a sequel or a epilouge that like a couple chapter long that would be perfect 3
attonranden chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
Hmm so what's the back story for 'Kyuubi' this time I wonder. Deranged uncle?

Also liquid band aids do not smell bad, they smell awesome... Not that I go around sniffing them :P
Jessgal chapter 111 . 9/30/2014
Loved it, it was gr8 the lemon and emotions were perfect. You jt gave an idea of wat love is like cause i ve neva been inlove b4 even though i am almost 18. But all d same tanx 4 such a beautiful story
ShizayAmuto1 chapter 111 . 9/7/2014
This story was so adorable xD I was really addicted to it! Although Takeshi sometimes got on my nerves -.- I really liked Shiroi and Blue though :) Can you maybe make a short story on describing Blue's past or something? He seemed like a really misunderstood character :( But other than that, reallu amazing story! I got sad knowing it was the last chapter :')
Anon chapter 20 . 8/28/2014
I hate it when I get pants and I can't fit anything in the pockets or the just don't have any and meanwhile guys are walking around with pockets big enough to hold laptops
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