|Reviews for Two Face|
| Guest chapter 72 . 3/1
im going to be honest and say i completely dislike shiroi guys, other than that, love your story
| psycho-uchiha chapter 110 . 2/7
Since I commented on chapters' 1 and 111, I'll put up another comment here. I'm sitting here, at the computer looking up fables and decide to look up The Crow and the Fox fable by Aesop ... this should be called The Raven and the Fox instead of Two Face o..o It's too much like the fable to not be called that! Just saying. Lol. I'm going to go to my insomnia corner with Gaara-senpai now. Toodles!
| psycho-uchiha chapter 111 . 2/7
I've got to say, though it took me a while to find this story once again after I lost it. I think when I first saw this story it was about ... when Naruto found out who wrote the letters. I got to say, this is by far one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I'm anticipating a sequel. I know you said you're thinking about it and probably won't, but I don't think it's complete without it. I feel like we need to know how Naruto and Sasuke, Takeshi and Shiroi deal with the long distance relationships they're now in. If Sasuke truly thinks he should find his brother (and I can see him finding him) and what he'll do after his life long ambition is complete and how long it takes.
I'll patiently wait :) I, like you, have my own work to deal with; original and fan fiction though fan fiction has taken over my life once again.
About Gaara's father ... in this story, he can rot in hell! In the anime/manga, I don't like him until episode 227 (I think) in Shippuden when Gaara learns the truth and all. And with Shikamaru finding someone, I can't help but think it's Gaara's sister; Temari xD I always see them as a couple no matter what happens.
I can't complain too much, because I love this story so much. I glared in anger in some parts, then cries at others, laughed when it was needed, felt heart broken when it came to pass. You're a great writer, I hope to read more of your stuff :)
| psycho-uchiha chapter 1 . 1/31
I finally found it after so long! :D I read this a very long time ago and I completely lost it, forgetting what the title was and who wrote it and everything! Now that I found it, I will enjoy every moment while I read it :3
| cary99 chapter 1 . 1/20
| Reddydukes chapter 111 . 1/13
This is the first fanfic to ever make me cry, I wish it never ended ;_;
| Sargaetorian chapter 111 . 1/13
Oh, man. I'm going to have to admit: I skipped over half of this story, because there was just something about it that turned me away. Maybe it was the style, the kind of faraway sense you narrated the story with, but I know it's only my preferences and I can tell that your writing is absolutely spectacular, and though I didn't get to experience the whole ride I can tell you this is one of the most well written works I've ever read. I read the end, and I began tearing up, that's how hard this hit me. Maybe someday I'll come back to this, read it in its entirety so I can fully appreciate the masterpiece you've spun, but as of now I'd like to thank you for imparting this story with us. It was beautiful, and I'm sure none of us will be forgetting the amazing journey you've led us along.
| AWarriorAmongMany chapter 111 . 1/1
Thank you for writing it.
| jj chapter 111 . 12/15/2013
wow I read few stories that make me feel like im growing with the characters but this is one of them and its amasing
| Tears Parallel chapter 111 . 12/14/2013
A lovely story that dealt with many social issues. Questioning one's sexuality, the general society's homophobia, the fact that you can't expect someone to stay faithful to you and that everyone makes mistakes ... I really felt like this was a story based on a real experience. Sure, it may have been made much more suspenseful with the Narutoverse (Kyuubi and Itachi's roles in the story for example), but the story just spoke out to me.
Although rather frustrating, I both like and dislike how you gave us an open-ended ... ending. It ended on such a hopeful but realistic tone, and it's up to the readers to imagine whether or not Sasuke and Naruto will get their happy ending. I think the fact that this isn't a stereotypical "happy ending" where all the characters' problems are resolved makes it so much more powerful and realistic.
I also really loved the folktale story here and there about the Fox and Raven. I can't seem to remember if you mentioned that it was an actual folktale or one you made yourself, but it was definitely a lovely touch. (Thanks also for not putting a lot of Japanese into the story. Judging by your comments it definitely seemed like you were considering it, but I think having another language suddenly thrown into a story just for fun is really off-putting for most readers. Most probably wouldn't understand what it means and would have to scroll down to read author's notes about it ... and that just breaks the spell the story puts us in!)
Thank you so much for writing it. This is definitely one of those stories where you come out of it learning something new about yourself.
| Crystal dragon the yaoi fan chapter 111 . 12/10/2013
That was absolutely beautiful. I cried, I laughed, I smiled, and it truly felt like I was there witnessing every bit. Thank you for gracing my existence with this story. It has changed my life and I will continue to read it for a very long time.
| NaruSasulover15 chapter 111 . 11/29/2013
this was an awesome story! read it from start to finish...took me three months to finish reading it. ending was so sad. almost made me cry
| Kairi chapter 111 . 11/17/2013
I've cried about 24 times during the three or four months it took to read this entire fanfic, and I havw to say, that every signle tear and minute spent reading this was worth it.
You were able to capture each character, so perfectly. Espically their personalities, there were moments where I hated Naruto for doing/acting/ or saying something stupid. And then there were times where I hated Sasuke, and that was mostly because you were able to completely get Sasuke's personality, form being a sweetheart to a pompus asshole.
You are by far, one of the best writers on , and I hope that you contiue to write more, whether it be a sequal to this, maybe another intense and beautiful story, or you could even write a book that wouldn't fanfiction at all.
All I have to say is that you created a beautiful work of art, from the begining to the end of this fanfic, all of it was beautiful, and in honesty, I can't think of anything bad or critical to review. I just want you to know, that your writing style, is one hell of a glorious trait.
| Lemon101 chapter 111 . 11/10/2013
When I finished this story all I could say was 'wow' for about 10 minutes. Anyways I think that there should be a sequal to this story.
| Akiyuzu-chan chapter 43 . 11/9/2013
Whew, sorry, but this is my limit.
Lots of this was really good, but by now I can't seem to bring myself to read more. :(
It's not about the story, I just can't read stuff that long.
Please know that this is what I consider art, really, it's amazing.
Have a nice day, and sorry again..