Reviews for Sasuke needs help!
Jacob Sartorius chapter 6 . 6/23
Omg make him masturbate to the video the. Sakura walks in on him and he hides the camera then she didn't notice but he records them having sex one time then he masturbates but then she finds out and get mad and horny. But she has sex with him to forgive him then the baby pops out. XD
Guest chapter 6 . 12/20/2015
Why the he'll woud he record himself touching his wife like...the hell is wrong wig sasuke
Guest chapter 6 . 12/30/2014
Its a great story but im annoyed that there is only 1 lemon in ... And hinata is not that cool shes a shy bitch,who is afraid of talking...you couldve rather made it ino then id understand ! Anti-karin yeah
RosarioSasuChu chapter 6 . 5/7/2013
Wow Hinata is a rebel! 0_o well she can't stay pure forever right?
fatalfuma830 chapter 6 . 2/26/2012
Love this story
ellyxelster chapter 6 . 12/26/2011
I'm sorry but I dislike this story, its too straight-forward, non-detailed story. But I can see the story, PLEASE IMPROVE. :D
Rogue Soul Alchemist chapter 6 . 5/8/2011
haha! 3
Rogue Soul Alchemist chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
good...
Rogue Soul Alchemist chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
3
Rogue Soul Alchemist chapter 3 . 5/8/2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Rogue Soul Alchemist chapter 2 . 5/8/2011
3
Rogue Soul Alchemist chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
luv it but longer lemon please!
maxout36 chapter 6 . 4/4/2010
r u gonna finish it? u shood its really good so far and i want 2 know wat hinata will do 2 sasuke.
Tenten2295 chapter 6 . 7/9/2009
I'm sorry to say this, but this story isnt really good.

I do like lemons, but your lemon writing isnt very good.

You rush your storys too much.

You dont have enough detail.

And Sasuke and Sakur and al the other charcters are really OOC.

Your chapters are short.

Lemons are supposed to be longer, passionate and detailed.

You need to have other point of views, not just Sasukes.

Sorry to say.

This story sucks.

-Tenten2295

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Dragga12 chapter 6 . 4/10/2009
wow this story sucked. I mean really. Ur story line sucked. DETAIL WHAT SO EVER! your grammar, because you can't spell worth shit!
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