|Reviews for If You Twist And Turn Away|
| LoverGurrl411 chapter 24 . 2/16
I seriously just realized how well you showed Jacob's growth. Growing up is a part of life, one that Stephanie Meyers decided was unneeded in her works, but you paced it beautifully. Seriously, I would take half a chapter from you if it meant some kind of update. I've reread this story countless times, and I always realize knew things about it, from the style to the narrative voice, etc..
I also recognize that, because of the progression, this story can't end with a J/B ending, and I want you to know (in case you don't, but you probably do) that it's okay. Sometimes characters take a life of their own and just plain good writing skills forces you to take the story in a different direction (pairing wise and ending wise) than you originally wanted to go. You won't be disappointing anyone with w/e ending you do eventually give us.
I honestly hope that one day, even if it's years from now (hopefully sooner, haha), you come back to this story. :) In the meantime I'll be waiting and rereading. :D
| Hael2009 chapter 26 . 11/15/2013
This is such a greAt story...i am so so sad you dropped it, and really?! Killing Sam then quitting? That sucks. Hopefully you'll come back and finish, I would love to read the rest.
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/2/2013
Again the same shit as the books. Why? No originality at all.
| InlovewithJake chapter 26 . 10/24/2013
5 yrs! Why hasn't this been finished yet? I hate when I get all into a story and its still not done yrs later.
| tracecord chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Just discovering this story, I'm already loving your Jacob
| April-Showers82 chapter 26 . 7/14/2013
I have a few questions. Why do you use cos instead of because? Is it due to it being used in informal conversation? Are you going to finish this story? It was really getting good. What will Jacob do about being alpha now that Sam is dead? There really isn't anyone else that can fit the role, even with Jacob not wanting it anyways. Thank you for making an incredibly believable and even likeable OC like Jenna. How will this relationship work with all that is going on? What will Bella do now? How will she react to the news? You definitely kept Bella in character with her wish-washy ways, her I love you but I love him more bs, and something that was mentioned but not addressed and being the real reason why she agreed with marrying Edward in this story is her fear of Jacob imprinting and leaving her. That one line made me sad and angry for Jacob and root for Jenna. And I am a Jacob/Bella fan all the way. How will Jenna fit into this story from here on out? I look forward to a new chapter and the end of this story.
| zandraia chapter 26 . 5/18/2013
You're just...really great. You do a great job of writing these characters and I really look forward to seeing where this story goes if you ever decide to pick it up again :)
| Camithe chapter 26 . 4/23/2013
please! PLEASE! update :'(
| Elvis has left the building chapter 26 . 4/11/2013
This story is absolutely wonderful. Jacob is perfect. Bella is unbearable. Jenna is very good... she's better than Bella. Please don't stop the story! Teach Bella a lesson, make her jealous. Make Jacob happy with Jenna... :)
| PastOneonta chapter 26 . 4/10/2013
This is absolutely fantastic. Your characters, the action, the dialogue, the emotion, the humor, the loss, it is all so fantastic. Jacob is uniquely perfect in his POV here, he is warm and wonderful and giving and in such pain we yearn to see him happy again.
I had started it some time ago but didn't finish hoping to return to find the story complete. I am so sorry you have left this story. Your writing is so good, with so much care and attention, I know you had more planned. Perhaps next time I check it will be done. Thank you for writing and for leaving it posted.
| Jessy Rhian chapter 26 . 3/15/2013
Just finished reading this and genuinely cried when I realised this was it :( I know it hasn't been updated for years now, but ohmygod, I want more. I'm sorry I didn't review each chapter as I went along, but I tend to read fics twice and review the second time round. This is one of the best fics I've read, each chapter has had me literally on the edge of my seat, open mouthed with my heart pounding. I love the way you write, the imagery, the emotions, everything, is amazing. The characters are brilliant, I'm in love with Jacob and Jenny, Quil and Embry (Wolfbry!) are awesome, you've even got me liking Sam and Emily! I'm so sad this isn't completed, but wanted to leave this note to say I've loved every bit of this story, and if you ever do decide to finish it (or summarise an ending) I'd love to read it. Thank you for writing and sharing this xx
| Guest chapter 26 . 11/16/2012
Not finished. Ugh. I read this cuz somebody recommended it. Nit done! Ahhhh!
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/15/2012
My husband would've been super pissed if I had awoken himlaughing at FF. But that foot stomping was funny and caught me off guard.
| LoverGurrl411 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Re-reading this story and wow! I love this chapter! Jacob's emotions are so raw, layered, and honest, which really lacks in most Jacob-centric stories. Great beginning! :)
| SeptemberSkies chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Whooo. It's been a while since I've read characterization like this. I give it two thumbs up!