Reviews for Till Dawn We Part
AwkwardIdeasLeadToThis chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
LOL! XD I can't stop laughing... The after effects are just.. HILARIOUS in my mind ;D
silentlover09 chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
oh wow, that was funny and good heheh though i do believe the ripped behind was a little much but hey thats ok i would like for these story to cont. till next time bye now.
DevilsVamp chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
nothing says lovin like broken bones! LoL
wtf chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
How old are you? I can't imagine any adult with half a brain would actually think that 'ripping someone in two and making them bleed' was even remotely sexy and it sure as hell isn't something you would do to the person you supposedly love. Trying to make torture sound romantic is ridiculous.
princesstinkerbell45 chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
wow he really rocked his world didn't he!wow
Livin-That-Crazy-Life chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
hm i wonder wat Billy said? lol luved da story
mia-dcwut-09 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
o man jacob has some explaining to do

for somereason i think itd be really nice to read what happen next

rough but hot smut writing
Anonymous Sister of the Author chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
oh no! billy saw the aftermath? bad bad bad!

ShiroOkamiInu chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
ok...never thought of them as a pair but i had to give it a chance. honestly...jacob was a lil too...uke for my tastes...too submissive...and yea...i was wondering where billy can he not hear what was going on?
Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
I love this couple! Nice lemon.

Kisses from Argentina!
Madame Beret chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
oh my god. That was very graphic :P

It was really good though. That last little paragraph made me smil Hannah
lema chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
she-angel chapter 1 . 12/24/2008

edward and jacob

that was cool

hope u make more of these

Tahalia001 chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Z.O. !

that was the shiz! that was so hot! my gosh I loved it!

the bed breakin was the icing on the cake, hehehe!

It is always the best when the enemies have rough, lustfilled SMEX .

Squeeble chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Oh yeah. That was frikkin amazing. _ Loved it.
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