|Reviews for Till Dawn We Part|
| AwkwardIdeasLeadToThis chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
LOL! XD I can't stop laughing... The after effects are just.. HILARIOUS in my mind ;D
| silentlover09 chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
oh wow, that was funny and good heheh though i do believe the ripped behind was a little much but hey thats ok i would like for these story to cont. till next time bye now.
| DevilsVamp chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
nothing says lovin like broken bones! LoL
| wtf chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
How old are you? I can't imagine any adult with half a brain would actually think that 'ripping someone in two and making them bleed' was even remotely sexy and it sure as hell isn't something you would do to the person you supposedly love. Trying to make torture sound romantic is ridiculous.
| princesstinkerbell45 chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
wow he really rocked his world didn't he!wow
| Livin-That-Crazy-Life chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
hm i wonder wat Billy said? lol luved da story
| mia-dcwut-09 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
o man jacob has some explaining to do
for somereason i think itd be really nice to read what happen next
rough but hot smut writing
| Anonymous Sister of the Author chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
oh no! billy saw the aftermath? bad bad bad!
| ShiroOkamiInu chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
ok...never thought of them as a pair but i had to give it a chance. honestly...jacob was a lil too...uke for my tastes...too submissive...and yea...i was wondering where billy was...how can he not hear what was going on?
| Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
I love this couple! Nice lemon.
Kisses from Argentina!
| Madame Beret chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
oh my god. That was very graphic :P
It was really good though. That last little paragraph made me smil Hannah
| lema chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!
| she-angel chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
edward and jacob
that was cool
hope u make more of these
| Tahalia001 chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
that was the shiz! that was so hot! my gosh I loved it!
the bed breakin was the icing on the cake, hehehe!
It is always the best when the enemies have rough, lustfilled SMEX .
LOVED IT! Wot!
| Squeeble chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Oh yeah. That was frikkin amazing. _ Loved it.