|Reviews for A Life Not Lived|
| be93 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
This was really beautiful.
I liked the subtly of it, never mentioning names or certain events but you could really feel what she meant.
Really original and well-written.
| Madame Beret chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
The rhymes are really good in this. That's always the hardest thing to do without making it sound random
| htbookreader1 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
i liked it...try another poetic attempt..it was good
| Lucy Taylor chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
The sentiment is wonderful but I'm sure as your professor/teacher informed you, that metre is off. The stucture is not correct either but all that can be easily remedied, byt fixing the number of syllables in each line.
| rory21 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
That's really great, i loved it :)
| NickiAngel66 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Wow that was very good. You are a excellent writer!