Reviews for A Life Not Lived
be93 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
This was really beautiful.

I liked the subtly of it, never mentioning names or certain events but you could really feel what she meant.

Really original and well-written.

be x
Madame Beret chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
The rhymes are really good in this. That's always the hardest thing to do without making it sound random

Beautifu Hannah
htbookreader1 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
i liked it...try another poetic attempt..it was good
Lucy Taylor chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
The sentiment is wonderful but I'm sure as your professor/teacher informed you, that metre is off. The stucture is not correct either but all that can be easily remedied, byt fixing the number of syllables in each line.
rory21 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
That's really great, i loved it :)
NickiAngel66 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Wow that was very good. You are a excellent writer!