Reviews for Transmutation
shortiee chapter 1 . 3/26/2009

Awesome chapter,

I hope you update soon cause I really want to know what happens next!xD
Safaia Bara chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Wow! This is fantastic! I don't normally read FMA fics (even though I've been obsessed with it for years...), but this one really caught my attention.

Good luck with the next chapter!

Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
I am already enjoying this story. I like the banter you have between the brothers but without an indication of who's speaking, about half way through, I was confused as to whether I was reading Alphonse or Edward.

I very very much enjoyed that Edward can see how brittle Winry is and am looking forward to how he finds out more about why.
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
This is a good story. Please continue. Ed and Winry forever.
CherryBlossoms38 chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Great job on the fic so far! It's very well written. Keep up the good work.
Ro0tin4Kagome chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Well this is my first FMA fic but I couldnt help it, it just sounded so interesting. So different. Yet im biased. lol

Ilove it. dont stop it okay. D
Pippy chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
You did a wonderful job i can't wait for the next chappie! Really good!
edxwin is cannon chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
keep going! cool fic! can you describe what happened to them that landed them in a hospital, unconcious for three days? update!
Syolen chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Interesting beginning :) I'll be looking forward to reading more.