Reviews for Political Alliances
Felon GT chapter 8 . 3/31
We can assume regarding shimpudden that Naruto will be more wroth of akatsuki kidnapping his brother in law Gara and poisoning Kankuro. That’s his wife immediate family right there.

Training trip maybe got some wind jutsu he made or recreated on his own. His clone training method is leagues ahead compared to canon. All aspects of his canon training is more hardened in this than canon from Taijutsu, ninjutsu. And maybe he got down or is close to getting rasengan with one hand if he did chakra control exercises more often with his clones during the trip

Sasuke retrieval mission I feel he’s dead to him and wouldn’t hesitate to kill him if to apprehend him fails. I doubt he will go second cloak 4 tails on orochimaru, cause the canon issue isnt going that far isn’t the same since Sasuke is dead to him. But maybe if Jiraya training trip proved some fruit that he can use phase one cloak 3-4 tails . He won’t lose control I believe. Seeing tayuya with a baby in her arms maybe something he feels akin to Sasuke of both to be father . Maybe not killing him or if he did aprehend Sasuke he lets him go or doesn’t pursue cause Sasuke is a father at this point. Something to feel akin to

Kakuzu hidan maybe the same route. But one thing for certain is that the rasenshurikan training will be faster since he’s wind element training is ahead. And maybe he already has standard wind rasengan one handed mastered during the training trip. Plus maybe he has worked on 2nd element training already during training trip.

Temari being there for him when he learns Jiraya death.
Maybe she goes with him during his training for sage or that at her stage of pregnancy for support. And it’s a good thing since she is in green zone once Pein attacks.

But things like him fighting pein isn’t have to be like canon. But if she does stay in konaha and pein encounters her and kills her infornt of him. The rage is worse than canon. His child unborn child is dead too.

Now if he is like in canon and hold off all the vengeance in his heart for seeing his wife and unborn baby die and does his talk no jutsu. Her revival, plus their baby in her.
I’d say he gets promoted to jonin once tsunade wakes up.

Danzo starts his grand plan and works on acquiring Temari for her child. Plot fails hopefully. And maybe maybe in a strange circumstance if Naruto shows up uninvited to the hokage choosing where Shikaku is present, that maybe Shikaku recommends Naruto as temp hokage (similar idea like in the fic “love your enemy”) as that is much better than Danzo. Maybe Danzo goes to intitiate kidnapping Temari from this humiliations. Just for spice to change from canon. It’s Naruto vs Danzo.

Oh Naruto does allow acces to cloud ninja about Sasuke even if he is a dad, he still went beyond to attack the 8 tails.

Naruto goes hokage submit, doesn’t fight Raikage. Fights Sasuke again. Tsunade wakes up, and gives her the position again so he readies for war. Maybe Temari gives birth by some point. And they send their baby to the toads for protection. She gets her body back in shape for war. Despite body protest of post partum. Or she stays with their baby.

In the end Naruto does become hokage. Maybe a Naruto vs Sasuke final clash and it might end in death. Maybe tayuya does in the war. Their child lives and Naruto takes the child in with Temari consent. If the Sasuke death route goes that way.

I feel Naruto took advantage of hokage training during the events of shimpudden using his clones for office tasks, reading books from politics, philosophy etc….

Maybe he can be the 6th hokage and Temari being there for him. He and Gara both Kage and bother in laws.

Hmmm maybe in some twisted add in movie plot. Naruto sees the canon timeline by maybe some kind of seeing alternate reality funijutus or something. If no political marriage happened, the shika/temari and he ends with Hinata. He sees it, feels confused and not wanting tos we anymore of that reality. That reality is set in stone and his own reality is his own.

In the end he comes home to spouse and their baby

We know though it’s not written but it assumes that Naruto becomes hokage and Temari is wife with chidlren (if one is a girl, she instructs the Suna Tensen fan in to her). Happily ever after
nezdanchikk chapter 11 . 3/17
No matter how many Naruto fanfictions I've read, I still haven't found a single good excuse for the fact that no one can recognize Naruto's parents. Like hey, wake up, his last name is UZUMAKI. Hmhmhmhmhm, who was the wife of the world famous fourth Hokage, let me think, well nooooo, there is definitely no connection here. And once upon a time, as much as 60 years ago (so long ago, no memories left), there was the village of Uzushiogakure, which was ruled by the UZUMAKI clan. And two of the two Kyuubi jinchuuriki were from the Uzumaki clan, both were sent to Konoha from Uzushio. Well, this is definitely just a coincidence, THERE IS NO RELATIONSHIP, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. What a nonsense.
nezdanchikk chapter 1 . 3/17
I’m not sure this review will be relevant 15 years later, but I’ll write it anyway. The sentences are too cumbersome, you should split them up. In many sentences there is a chaotic chain of actions and/or subjects of discussion where one thing follows another, and in most cases it would be better if you split one such larger sentence into several smaller ones based on the logic between them. I hope that this review is no longer so relevant, and that you have long ago significantly expanded your writing skills :)
Felon GT chapter 2 . 3/2
It good to reread this again. The only way Naruto canon can work out a relationship with her under the circumstances and actions they take that result in a happy marriage
king18121999 chapter 17 . 12/30/2023
love it
MisoSparkz chapter 39 . 11/28/2023
Love this story
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2023
Thanks letting me know that the lemons had been edited out before I wasted time reading the story! I try not to waste time reading non-lemon stories!
Logicalillogical chapter 5 . 5/2/2023
"Of course how else can I use wind chakra." Temari asked him looking at him like he was an idiot.

You don't need to be wind natured to use wind chakra.

By this logic, Hiruzen has 5 affinties since he can use all 5 elements.
rosaurocunanan16 chapter 1 . 4/5/2023
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sakurai.ryuu chapter 40 . 1/6/2023
i want next i love this story
Dasgun chapter 1 . 12/5/2022
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saiyan prince1 chapter 40 . 8/16/2022
Read this fic twice. Loved it both times. Awesome
TheShob chapter 3 . 7/17/2022
I like it
YeagerMeister31 chapter 13 . 6/27/2022
Well, that was quite amusing and Temari met the freak huh, I wonder what happens next.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 6/27/2022
Things are progressing all over, I wonder what happens next.
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