Best naruto love story fanfic ever. I was so enthralled I couldn't sleep till I finished. Now I wish masashi kishimoto wrote his version as naruto/tenmari.

GTFO with SakuLee. That's retarded crack. And Tayuya is fucking fodder LMFAO. SasuSaku is canon and developed unlike your retarded crack shit. Deal with it, fag. Kill yourself.

You know you guys could learn how to write fanfic by reading Star Wars fanfic they don't exaggerate they don't make things up and they don't distort read a Star Wars fanfic and learn how to be a proper fanfic out of people Naruto is not military nor was it a country in order to go to war with the sound village I really wish you guys a stop making novel military holistic cuz its not its ninjas so you guys basically should we have Star Wars fanfic and see how to properly do fanfic I've read many of them and they're much more professional than the Naruto fanfic writers in fact I think some of them could go professional personally and is nothing wrong with seeing how a proper fanfic is done and I don't want to hear fanfiction I don't see a word of fiction in the story my cat could write a better Naruto don't you write in here I do like your story but you need to stop a but seriously you should read a Star Wars fanfic see how much better they are at writing stories without exaggerating any stay true to the story of what the writing and they don't scream fanfic when the story doesn't match up with the rain they just say I'm just not good at writing in the admit it I read a couple with a minute they were good at writing it but it came out better than half and is nothing wrong with learning how to properly do a FanFic people and I don't want to hear the screaming fanfic because that is crap or excuse I quote Naruto in the story about the hero changes it is no longer about the hero

Just saying that even tho u said u won't do a sequel to "political alliance", just sayin that hopefully one day a great idea will pop in your head on how to continue off with this story. Just think about it. Give it time as long as it doesn't interfere with your work on the other creations.

Real good story. It doesn't need those perverted lemons

Its me again don't listen these meatheads you don't need lemons and your story your story just fine it's perfect without it they just perverts to want to be one to read Naruto porn you story making good I'm giving some constructive criticism whenever first of the character of Hinata when you make a sequel you should have that her father forced to the married the second house of hyuga Clan I got the perfect name for the anonymous Hyuga. Ryo Hyuga her childhood sweetheart they grew up side by side until his family was sent to the second branch then we use the Jitsu the race the daughters memory of him you so much like Naruto that's why she thought it was him how's that for a new character let me know how you like it you probably can't say anything back but I'll give you heads up but I do like you story but but I'm going to ask you something which is likely a people getting tired of doing the generic pairing you don't study guide to write these Naruto fanfic and this is a good one go with some Star Wars fanfic how good these ones actually in fact that very few crap ones in between and this one is good your way up there with Edward AP nevermind just look up his fanfic Naruto and Temari so please no lemons what's the weather would greatly appreciate it and don't listen to the perfect like you said and I wish you take my appreciation for the new character I created for the hyuga Clan and just take my suggestion that's all I'm just say it's time to the branch fell from that nonsense they called maybe you be the right of the change the way fanfiction are that'd be pretty cool huh so you can be done changed it will be nice also my suggestion recent Star Wars fanfic you want to see how decent the Star Wars ones I'm not kidding there's some really good writers of the apparently be actually off answer the show some of them more than enough of them maybe you guys don't want to be a written by them soon should take some lessons from them I like this story and I hope you'll take my truck to constructive criticism seriously I'm being sincere about this this is actually really good story so I guess that's never heard of browser rivals Fanfict ex about how to properly do new ones well that's about all I have just got to give you construct your head up and don't pay no attention to the perverts they want that only go told go rent adult parody of Naruto I'm a good if you do for the lemon up there fanfic will take it down that's early that's what they were stablished she don't want lemons up there I can tell you are a fan of the show and I think you took it down because you felt this taste and disrespectful and I appreciate that so thank you I gotta go my cat reacting like a scene from Terminator 2 judgement day

Love your profile picture sin city is story is good so far I just finished the second chapter.

Why remove lemons

Naruto should have been paired with her in the actual manga/animei. In my opinion she the most gorgeous character plus being brother in-law with Gara is a great idea. Plus he is chunin in the 2nd part. I never liked the fact he was genin all the way in the series. Sakara realizing her obsession issues finally. Please do a sequel.
I hope the naruto creators can follow your example and make a "alternate naruto universe" series or movie about this, like the "Tenchi Muyo series "for instance"

This is the best naruto romance fanfics I've read. I plead to you to write a sequel. Take as much time as you want to write it, there is no rush.

Are you did a good job with the story I like the way you a study to tradition of Japanese weapons but I hinata hyuga would never be allowed to marry outside of clan least that's what I've heard about the show and Neji was never date tentenI you should just stay focus on your story not try to make everyone pair up with each other and top Hyuga I'm not allowed to marry outside the clan even- branch member was married to the main house if anything else I know it doesn't claim fanfict it was fanfiction then you would have looked up the traditional Japanese wedding because that really goes out the window when you swing that clean

I think you should make a sequel to the story I'm looking forward to it but also looking forward to someone who's willing to change the way fanfics of written the stop writing based on pairing when it be cool you were the one that changed the way fanfic did Steph it made it more no close enough to actual image of writing not fan girl and fanboy right in I know didn't say fanfic this fanfic I'm not seeing any fiction in any of these stories I see technology in a world that doesn't belong in their world and just choose now the last movie make it possible doesn't mean it actually is the case if you are a true fan of the stories episodes of Naruto then you go and fix this cruise has to Word fanfic at the event of the show is part of it. Someone who watches one of two episodes and hope you get it I wish it was a right on this site that I could actually do that so much for talent but the story is good I just wish someone would change my fanfic friends this stuff I think that's why the thinking about

This is actually really good story I'm looking for the sequel when you done with it and don't want to go to stone and Grandma I suck at spelling myself happy holidays no spiking the eggnog just get it

I'm looking forward to the sequel if you can make one soon be grateful nevermind I got nothing hopefully I'll see you soon and thank the story is actually pretty good oh and thank you for taking the lemon out it's not necessary you don't really need lemons love is all you need to use your imagination for everything else I'd appreciate it thanks I understand why you write lemons but it not need it

Oh god. Naruto is IN for it!