Reviews for Political Alliances
Guest chapter 8 . 4/16/2015
Wait a cold shower oh no he is becoming more and more like jiraya hahaha
dragolf chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
dose anyone know if theres any more stories like this? where naruto has to get married because of a contract?
DoubleMango2020 chapter 39 . 3/15/2015
This is my second time reading this story and I love this story so much.
Allan99 chapter 40 . 3/10/2015
Ahh,,,one good story,,,thats um talkng about best fanfic...hmm,,,do you mind to make this sequel,,,maybe political alliances shipuden,,?
tapig chapter 12 . 3/4/2015
toooo longgg chapterssss.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
This is a amazing story why not update it? This story is counted as one of the legendary stories Im sure people would be happy if you made the next installment been wating years for it
DoubleMango2020 chapter 40 . 2/20/2015
Great Story and Please maybe make A Sequel Please.
DoubleMango2020 chapter 31 . 2/20/2015
And here we go And great Chapter.
DoubleMango2020 chapter 19 . 2/20/2015
Ohh great Danzo this is not going to be good and great Chapter.
DoubleMango2020 chapter 13 . 2/20/2015
Ugg Danzo needs to shut up and get his nose away from other People's Buisnisse and Great Chapter.
jbadillodavila chapter 40 . 2/1/2015
Hhh
kitten198485 chapter 40 . 1/23/2015
Great Story, I look forward to a sequel.
TCSS98 chapter 2 . 1/18/2015
This is a really good story and I like the way you have portrayed the idea. The only problem is the grammar and spelling for me, I am a stickler for this stuff, I do not know why. I have seen small spelling mistakes and commas in the wrong places. I have also seen sentences that go on for too long and could actually be broken up into multiple sentences. This is because the sentence seems to have too many commas in it, or it has too many ands in it. In some cases, both. I am saying this now so that you know what to look out for if you are currently beta-ing someone or looking over your chapters. Other than that stuff, I think this is a very good story, while this might not be an original idea, unless you came up with it first, the way in which you portray the story and characters is very good. I am a very big fan of your Naruto Hatake story and I greatly enjoyed it. I wish you well on your adventures on .
Hercules8 chapter 4 . 12/24/2014
Great story!
Guest chapter 21 . 10/15/2014
from what i read so far NEEDS MORE COMEDY THIS STORY HAS WAY TO MANY LOWS AND NO HIGHS
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